HAH Wash good story

I just loved this damn story. All the characters are so in character and I love those flashbacks, too.

... and then I realized that there is no end in this story. ;_; I know that the lack of inspiration is a horrible thing, but please, just please, if you have anything to add, be kind and add it. I'd appreciate it a hell lot.

Please post the rest! This is a great story!

Hey!

I really like your story, and now I'd like to ask if you could give me a permission to translate it into Finnish. I would publish the story in , and tell them it's originally your story, not mine, and only a translation.

Yeah new chapter.

Liked the flashbacks, while chapter was written really well. Think you got Wash's stubbornness down to a T.

Please post more soon

I love this chapter it was wonderful written and the ayani/taylor/wash part was brilliant! I'm still soooo interested in seeing this tale sompleted so please update SOON! I can't wait so read about her recovery. (it's wash she will recover! OR?)

Woohoo! I'm so happy you updated!

OMG SHAWN YOU NINJA! THIS WAS FABULOUS AND AMAZING AND YOU HAD ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT FOR THE AYANI/TAYLOR/WASH SCENE CUZ IT WAS PERFECT AND WONDERFUL AND AYANI'S SUCH A DAMN FRAKKEN BAMF. GOD. YES. I LOVE THIS. AND THE END, THE VERY END GAVE ME SHIVERS! If there was a 'heart' button I would heart this chapter :D.

So glad you are continuing this - I actually squeed a little when I got the alert! I think this was really well done, and not to worry, the scene with Ayani was wonderful. Can't wait to see how you wrap this up.

You updated! Goodness, it made me so happy to see this story wasn't discontinued or something like that. This was a great chapter, I especially liked the flashback to Wash being shot and being taken care of by the Taylors.

I hope you update soon!

just catching up a bunch of reading-this is such an amazing story-I truly hope you continue!

My God! I love all the flashbacks. Wash is going to have a hell of a hard time forgiving herself for killing Lucas. And the ending is so cute. She came back to him! that was so sweet! Waiting on the next one!

Bloody brilliant! I love the flashbacks!

I was wondering if Taylor forgiving Wash for killing Lucas would be an issue. I'm glad that was addressed in this chapter. Parents will forgive their kids for everything (or pretty much anything) but when someone hurts their kid, for whatever reason, in self-defense or not, rationality exits out the door. But you're so spot on with Wash. She's going to be the hardest on herself.

I'm on the edge of my seat!

I had to leave a review because it was absolutely brilliant. Loved it.

* HYPERVENTILATES*! OMG! OH! MY! GOD! WOMAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME? HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT? FOR WHY? THAT WAS BLOODY AMAZING! ALL THE FLASHBACKS AND THE HUMOUR (you have Elisabeth down PAT omg you're awesome)AND THE EMOTION AND THE FRIGGIN EVERYTHING AND THE END! HOLY MOTHER OF GOD! SHE RETURNED TO HIM LIKE SHE PROMISED! DUDE! SERIOUS FRAKKEN SKILL. ZOMG! OMGOMGOGMOGMGOMOGMOGMOGMG! I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED THE NEXT CHAPTER. NEED IT. N.E.E.D! THERE IS NO OTHER OPTION!

On a more... sane note, this was friggin fantastic and i loved every word, every scene, everything. You got amazing writing skills and I await your next chapter most. eagerly.