Hi, this narrative was beautiful, and it became even more stellar since you've paired my ship in your story: Tenma/Nina. I know that the story is already complete, but, perhaps, you can enlighten me as to what will happen after Johan gained consciousness, and most especially, would Tenma eventually realize his own feelings for Nina in a story or at least through private message? I would deeply appreciate your response. Thank nonetheless!

Wonderful short story.

I was deeply impressed the way you added each new part to the story with "While the monster sleeps" with an extra two lines about what the next segment's about.

How did you come up with something like that? It really made the story feel more... like a story!

And Nina 'imagning' a hand patting her head, daw, Johan can be so sweet -