I really like this story. It is interesting and engaging. I like that Amara is Serena’s sister from the past. I really hope you update this story.

How is darien heart broken when he was talking smack about her

Im glad amara is on her side

What a bunch of arseholes

I feel like there really was no growth in the story. I mean when Serena left everyone just packed up and moved on with their lives like nothing ever happened. plus Serena just took Darien back without so much as a pout, just one look and poof back together. Same with the scout sure Raye was kind of prissy but even that was a little flat. Everyone showed like no regret for their actions and it just seemed like Serena went on vaction had her kids came back and life just went on like they all hadn't just casually stabbed her in the back. Plus there was no closure about this underlining hate and resentment that the everyone has for her everyone just gets over it like its nothing cause I mean come on the girl pretty much saves the day all by herself, is pretty much all of their best and first friend and your going to disown her cause of a little whining! Really I think their was a lot that just got skipped over and it came really flat.

I like the plot enough to read this far, plus my curiosity, but it's just too flat. There's practically nothing emotional about what I've read. Any scenes that could've been very emotional are either completed within a sentence or two (thus dampening the emotions) or nonexistent or replaced with flat dialogue. Either way, l just can't emotionally connect to the story at all, making this a boring read, and I just can't bring myself to continue reading this. Sorry.

Here are my questions. 1. I saw the summary for this. But is there more to the plot? 2. When does it take place? Be specific. 3. How old is everyone in it? 4. What level of power are the Sailor Scouts at in the fanfic? 5. How did they reach that level? 6. Why was Serena going to the temple at the beginning of the fanfic? 7. What did the scouts want to talk about? 8. Why was Serena late to it? 9. Was there anyone on Serena's side at that time? If so, who? Be sure to let me know. If you want, you can choose what questions you want to answer, and the rest can be answered later.

Nick Johnson

Please update. This is a great story.

Brilliant, Loved the Story.
Small tidbit, Maybe make the chapters longer?
It's a small suggestion but it's okay if you don't.
Would you have any recommendations to Stories like this one?

please update soon

This chapter you said December 30 they were born. Chapters back when she wrote a letter you said December 10th

Stop changing for him. He disnt deserve you if you have to change yourself

love your story! can't wait for more! XD

niceeee

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