I didn't think you could equal the companion starter to this but you did. The fit wonderfully together. Though this one didn't make my monitor go all blurry it was wonderful and fitting and special and *sigh* them. He and her... more please.

This was just utterly amazing too. So beautifully written, I loved reading it. It was fantastic! I thought ot was really exquisite how she said all those thing Peter had already heard before, but in her own way and not because she remembered them or anything, but just because it felt right! And when she went on about what an extraordinary person he was and him thus being deserving of her love that was just incredible too. It made me tear up. It was just really wonderful, and such a lovely follow-up to the other story. I loved it very much, you are a marvellous writer.

Mathilde

OMFG I can't with this, I'm sobbing with this fic, Olivia needs to remember Peter, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, this is so perfect

What's Not Meant to Be Lost

Thank you Invariant, for dedicated this fic to me too... I'm so thankful and flattered because you are one of my favorite Fringe!Fic writers. Everybody should read this one and Broken (my absolutely favorite) and What's Not Meant to Be

I could feel the two of them being ripped apart by the uncertainty of who they were and what was real.

You wrote this perfectly - the emotion and intensity was overwhelming. It hurt so much in the beginning and felt so good in the end.

Please keep writing, I really enjoy your work! Thanks for sharing!

oh my fricking god.

i just can't. i just- oh my god.

the quotes. THE FREAKING QUOTES.

i hate you.

but i love you and your fanfics so much it hurts.

it ended happily this time.

i can go to bed finally at 4:30am with a smile on my face.

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please never stop writing polivia fics.

never. everrr ever ever ever.

I've read your companion piece, but didn't get around to reviewing it. Let me just say you're an absolute wordsmith. Couple that with your story-telling ability and it's quite a combination.

There's something about your diction that makes me think you come from a place where the English language is used with a bit more formality and it seems like so much thought and care is ingrained into each sentence you construct.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading. I promise I'll give a proper review next time!

And it kills me inside, everyday knowing you don't want to be in this world with me. - and here is when my tears started...

"Peter, you're supposed to stay, you're supposed to be here, because you belong with me." - ASDFGGHJKLL WHAT IS THIS I'M FEELING! WHAT IS THIS! SOBBING I AM SOBBING RIGHT NOW!

"You belong with me, because I love you." *SCREAMING* *SCREAMING*

"Because I can get use to this.-OMG! I LOVE YOU! SRSLY!

THIS IS HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE YOU!

Yep, I am honey! Had I written it from Peter's POV you would have come to that conclusion effortlessly. I tried to purvey though that he'd *felt* this was his Olivia and then *knew* because she was saying things to him she'd said in the past.

Parts of his past bleed through to form her current thought, and why she's saying them now, is because, in this timeline, she's never had to say them before. But here, in this story, it's what convinces him that this *is* his world, but a different, screwed up version of it. Honestly, if I wanted to play with the Peter P.O.V you'd have read of his inner turmoil and how he came to the conclusion that this is, somehow, where he belonged.

I tried to purvey that as much as I could through her, but I had to be realistic about just how much she'd actually be able to deduce and how much would still be a mystery to her. None of us can tell what another person is thinking, but we can have some-kind of an idea.

If this wasn't our Olivia, he wouldn't have ended up with her in the end. Cause I'm against him with ANY OTHER universe version of her.

In my mind, in these stories, she's merely a different kind of person because she has a different past. And of course, this is ultimately, because of all the things she's said, what he realizes in the end.

This is my biggest fear. I really hope this is his Olivia, that one day she will remember things about him. Because I'll be really torn if Peter makes the same mistake again. So I'm hoping with the quotes you had this Olivia say to Peter, the same things our Olivia have said to Peter, you're saying that this IS our Olivia.

OMG! OMG OMG! I just hope that if the writers decide to go this way they do something like this, I'm still not very sure of where I stand with the "Peter it's not home" thing, but this was absolutely beautiful and so true, so honest; I don't think there would be a better way to convince Peter that he is home than this, for olivia to recite all those words that were so essential in every step of their relationship, you are awesome with symbolism in words. Thank you for writing this, I'm missing them so much and there are not a lot of fics this days, I hope you keep on writing a lot, and your use of words again; so poetic! and thank you so, so, so much for the mention at the beginning. Beautiful. ;_;

Oh.

My.

Polivia.

So. So. So. So. Good. Amazing. Fabulous. Beautiful. ALL IF THE FEELINGS UGH SERIOUSLY. I can't even believe how fantastic this is. I wanted to quote my favorite parts, but there were so many it take a couple of pages lololol xD You are quickly becoming one of my favorite p/o writers ever. I loved all the quotes from previous episodes and how you incorporated those into the fic. So beautiful omg I have tears in my eyes :''') I needed this so bad and I was so thrilled to see another story from you. I honestly can't think of any other adjective to describe this fic except beautiful. That's why I keep saying it xD

Absolutely wonderful job. Thank you so much for this :')

*GIVES YOU A HUGE CHRISTMAS-Y HUG* Thank you so much for this :')

I have to say, ever since I read your previous oneshot, I was all kind of sad about P/O and season 4, but once again, you've delivered the hope after the pain, so I'm a happy shipper again :'D I loved how you made her say things that Olivia had told Peter in the past, and yet not make it be her remembering him (though I wouldn't mind that either). I loved that it still made him realize that he could love HER without guilt. Let's hope really hard for something similar on the show.

Thank you again for sharing these with us! You're the awesome one ;)

*Elialys*