"Lo siento no he tenido aquí antes. Oh, did Bebé, lo siento mucho."

Forgot to mention that I love the cat, Sparky.

Great job! If reminded me of a series I'm in the middle of writing.

Thank you so much for finishing your story. I think you did a good job of it. I am always in favour of the details that you do not necessarily need for the story, but give it life. Of course that is just part of it. I like your characterizations and as a foreign speaker I am always glad when sentences have a "flow" to them. I can totally read your story, it is nice and descriptive and even if there is a word I do not know I get the overall meaning of the sentence. I try to learn the words I dont know, but occasionally I stumble over stories that are an exercise in masochism because the author overcomplicates. Your story is lovely to read. As for future stories I would love to read something in CSI Cyber, but that is just me and my belief that there is a lamentable lack of stories in that fandom. Whatever you do decide to write, I will certainly take a look. I absolutely have to check out Teen Wolf, because never even watched one episode. Hope to read more from you.

So cuteeee!

oh god that was hott

This was so cute. I literally read this all at once. Please continue writing as it was sooo amazing! :)))

I'm a writer too, i go by many names, and i loved your work. You are very talented. I really loved this story you should do some more Castle fanfics.

I would like the translation because my spainish is limited to hello, where is the bathroom? and counting.

I kinda love that this is written in Ryan's first person. Looking forward to more.

Pleeaaaseee tell me you're finishing this! This is the best Esposito X Ryan fic I have found and I really really really wanna see it complete! Please please please please!

...there is more coming right? You can't stop there! Continue! I demand it! I haven't found this good of a story in ages, please keep writing! I shall eagerly await the next chapter!

Although I don't want to believe it there's a chance that this story is discontinued?

I hope not because its amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon because so many people love this

That would be "Write fanfiction, play Halo, and drool over the adorableness of Ryan and Esposito. Mostly Esposito."

: )

I'm guessing this has been abandoned but really wish you would finish. Great story. Love the portrayal of Kevin and Javi. And we definitely need more Kevin whump age stories out there!