Greetings! Here's hoping that this review finds you well, and still thinking of how to continue this story! I am glad I took the time to read it, and am happy to say I like the plot, the premise, and the story line! I am looking forward to more chapters in the future! I have all positive thoughts towards this fic, and hopefully it's not dead or on life support, but simply on hiatus until your muse decides to let the rest of the story out of her hands into yours! And hopefully life isn't kicking you too hard right now! Here's hoping that this story can get a breath of new life, along with your other stories!

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“Y’all ugly! Bye!”
*disappears in a puff of smoke*

Brother the humor is excellent...makes u laugh every time...it's been a while I read such a good fan-fic different from Cannon and fresh to take

Great job please continue

U added a oc and ruin the story. No wonder u haven't came back to finish it. U screw it up.

Take it easy is a great story. Please find some time to bring it to its conclusion. It would be a shame if you didn't. I enjoyed your take on Shippuden story line.

Why not get out hiruzen from the barrier? Like that orochi-pedo is forced to drop it to reach it and find itself in the open air

I know it's a bit late to be reviewing this but...

Is this story supposed to be full crack?

I'm kind of disappointed that such an interesting concept just fell into cliche filled crack.

Great chapter and plot

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE ! Continue this story this story is the best naruto fan fiction out there .
THEN can you please continue on the chronicle story after you finish this one .

Your oc that your so proud of is a joke.
1. Orochimaru wouldn't create something stonger than him that he couldn't control.
2. You expect us to believe he was created in only a couple of months? He's got a brand new blood line for crying out loud.
3. Even though he has never fought Naruto before which means no real test of his abilities, he can fight and defeat Naruto easily. B.S.

Just another average, run of the mill overpowered oc. You have nothing to be proud of.

I think you misspelled it... wait, no they are that dumb. the Durr...chiha

PLZ FINISH THIS BOOK!
THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD
PLZ TO WRITE BACK FOR THE ANSWER
I BEG ON HANDS AND KNEES

Which version of bamf is he referencing to? The teleport one or the acronym... Or both?

Great chapter! Love how Shino took out his enemy. :D Also really glad to see Itachi no longer playing the bad guy.