chi chi is the worst gohan plz tell them it's ok to leave chichi she's a pain.

I fell that she would be strong by now it's been a year she could have gravity trained! it's good but I miss her fire for training. just flying should not drain her by the time now. I feel as time goes on u made her stop growing much in strength even tho she had much time to train. plus engry plus should have set her free of her holds at freza

It only took me from 5am to 12 pm to finish this, I enjoyed this fanfic it was quite entertaining

Awee

I've been reading this since 5 am now its 9 am...I should get some sleep,but I can't this fanfic has me hooked. I enjoyed this chapter BTW.

I'm not sure why I'm reviewing this when this was published a long ass time ago and ur probably not even on this website anymore ebut meeehh

I love this very much, it's difficult to find interesting dbz fanfiction x oc's that are at a proper pace. Not too fast nor too slow. Also ones where goku and the oc don't automatically click and everything is' sunshine and rainbows'

Ah I'm tearing up a bit, I'm glad you didn't change up the plot though.

I admit I'm bit of a sucker for drama in fanfics

Love it!

good job xd

good start

Well, this was adorable, worth adding to my favourites and worth reading as well.

Next time you do a DBZ story I'll be sure to check it out.

Hm, Ariel is very well constructed so far, I do hope she will have a bit more impact but I understand if her roll will be minimal, but so far no complaints, I'm not getting any Mary-Sue vibes, but considering the good job you did with Keiko I'm not surprised.

Yes, long-haired Future Trunks is super cute, I'm glad you agree.

Well, see you around.

Ah, the mysterious May, does this mean the adorable cinnamon-bun that is Goten isn't gonna be born? That like my only concern.

Anyways i'll catch you later.

You know, you spin Keiko are selfish, but she's really not that bad, my heart bleeds for her, even I cant exactly relate.

On the other hand, we have Android Keiko there to call Chi-Chi out on being a bitch, I guess that's the closest we're ever going to get to a real fight-between them, cause I don't think Keiko is the type to get into a catfight with Chi-Chi, she's too nice for that.

Bye, keep up the good work.

Wow! Plot twist that I probably should have seen coming, you totally used all that fluffy-cute stuff to distract me, it worked, this chapter has real impact!

So, she's Android 21? interesting, interesting, I wonder how she'll change the saga, oh, does this mean Cell has four forms now?

Bye, see you next chapter