I love this story! Yukio is the best!

Continue PLEEEEASE!

Mukoro Rokudo

Aiden was so brave! AWESOME

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I’ll be honest, before you decided to revise this was very badly written, no depth, comparable to looking stick figures when expecting to see a painting. I remember being dissatisfied the first time because I loved the idea of a dragon loose in the one piece world (She has non of that antibodies thing so dragonifacation is possible) but it was hard to read.

Now though the fact I can ENJOY reading the chapters you revised is a massive improvement so I shall now hit the favorite button

Yes! Kick butt! Great chapter so far!
Mostly out of curiosity are you going to continue to tailor villains for Yukio in each arc? It's feels a little disjointed when she goes off alone to fight. Also... do you want a reference for the other dragon slayer attacks? I found the fandom sites are great resources for that! And you can bet that someone wrote up a list of all the ones Natsu used.
Aside from that, very interesting story so far: I can't wait to read more about Aiden! He's adorable!
Best of luck writing!

I first read this fic literally over 5 years ago, I only recently got back into fanfiction after a long hiatus and I was so excited to find this again! Im so excited you're updating again and I cant wait for the next chapter! I'm really loving the length of the later chapters and your writing has improved so much. I can't wait to see how Yukio's and Sanji's friendship/relationship progresses. And see more of her backstory! You are doing an amazing job keep it up!

Wait is she or he a girl or a boy?

Wait, she SEES the car speeding towards her, but instead of keep going, since she was already was running or trying to go BACK the way she came, shes going to stop in the middle of the road and 'brace for impact' like that was the ONLY option she had without trying anything else to AVOID impact with the car? *lol*

Love this! Will be waiting for more!

Intense chapter, and who was Etsu working for?

holy crap! I can't remember some things that happen in gonna have to go back a reread...but hey that means I can enjoy the book all over again!

This is a great story with a strong and cleverly made oc! It's hard to find good stories, hope you have more chapters soon!

Can’t wait to read more!