Reviews for A Game of Shadows
Taz19 chapter 10 . 4/19/2016
I was wondering when this event held for 9 chapters; was about to ask it in review but then got the answer on chapter 10 X"3

So this is like the 4th game for Neku to be here in the game... Can I ask how?
I mean, The Reaper's Game is actually between Joshua and Megumi. But Megumi already been erased by Joshua (cause the time's up), and Joshua somehow decided to keep Shibuya and let Neku and the others back to RG.
Why is there another Reaper's Game?
Why the hell Neku's in the game again? Did he die -again? (Poor him...)

And I still kinda confused about:
-how could Sora wake up without Roxas
-why DiZ and Riku still want Roxas and Namine to get back to their Somebody
-Why is Axel's there?! I mean, I thought he was Roxas's entry fee...

I hope you'll reply to answer my questions **)/ I reall love this fic and I want to understand so I can follow the story... I'm sorry I'm bad at understanding something complicated orz-

Anyway, I really love this fic! (I know I mentioned that but still-)
Oh my god thank you for making this!
Roxas and Neku are my favorite characters! (Tho I love Joshua more lawl) I hope Joshua'll appear more often ;;;;)/ oh c'mon, Composer, what are you busy with?! Go encounter Roxas! /slapp

Waiting for another chapter~! X3
blackkyu chapter 10 . 9/26/2014
Interesting, can't wait to see where this goes.
AlyTheRaygirl chapter 10 . 4/4/2014
It's a shame that you had to stop here. I was hoping to find out how it ends.
XphiaDP chapter 10 . 9/21/2013
That was absolutely amazing! Please update soon!
Scarlet Ruby Rose chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
Please update soon! :)
iamwhoiamiamwhoi chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
You would think it would be Xion or Namina -_-
Alyss Penedo chapter 8 . 5/3/2013
Oh! My mistake; I realized I mixed up Axel and DiZ X3
Alyss Penedo chapter 7 . 5/3/2013
Well, this is certainly getting interesting! Keep reading, keep reading...

Maybe Sora would regress back to a Heartless if left without Roxas? Or unable to use the Keyblade (seeing as Roxas has Sora's 'power') or something?

If Roxas represented Org. XIII's 'light', would he radiate a strong aura of light instead of darkness? Though technically, Nobodies are neither of Light nor Darkness...
But whatever! It still works!
Alyss Penedo chapter 6 . 5/3/2013
I feel like DiZ is characterized as unnecessarily evil. Or maybe it just looks that way from Sora's POV...

Reading, reading...
Alyss Penedo chapter 4 . 5/3/2013
DUNDUN DUN! The plot thickens :P
...Is Neku the Composer or Conductor in this story? That's the impression I keep getting; that he's more involved with the Game itself now. Or is it just wistful thinking on my part?

...There seems to be a random extra line break in the middle...
Alyss Penedo chapter 2 . 5/3/2013
Note: Neku never mentions UG before Roxas pulls it outta nowhere.
Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Good start! Interesting, and I can't wait to see how this plays out (or, maybe I can wait long enough to type out a review. Cuz I'm patient like that ;P ). Anyways, this is great! Gotta wonder why Neku's in the Game again...

The only thing that stuck out: I don't really think Roxas would just randomly grab the hand of anyone who offered theirs to him. Seems a little OOC. Try some more caution/hesitation/resistance?
Xion chapter 9 . 3/26/2013
Make more i really enjoyed this series.
Sunny Lighter chapter 9 . 2/24/2013
This is awesome, can't wait for more
TheDreamLivesonin9Memories chapter 9 . 12/19/2012
OKAY so i couldnt see any mistakes. I like the story but i do have to ask was that ven you were talking about? And maybe you could make Neku tell Roxas more about himself and Shiki and the others and is time during the game. Well this is what I think.
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