holy crap this took a turn. at the beginning of the chapter when link was thinking of all that crap, it reminded me of dark link. more specifically, that scene is twilight princess where the 3 dark links are together. damn that was something dark. too dark

For all I care it could end here... If it wasn't for that "Dark Link stuff" (which the story most likely built up to until now) it would just be the perfect end! Please don't get me wrong - this is the highest of praise I can give, for I could not imagine ANY story to end on a better note!
On the other hand, my expectations for the "true ending" have just risen to heights I have not known to exist before. That said, I am hoping against odds that there indeed may be a higher form of satisfaction one could attain from a written story, and that you actually managed to put it into words for others, as well as myself, to revel in.
Long story short: So far it's the best story I've read and I expect the rest of the story to be similar, if not better.
(I am very forgiving in terms of grammar mistakes and the like, though... )

Simply... Amazing.

Loved the story, thought the speech sometimes threw me off:

"Person A speech," Person B (verb)

"Person B speech"

is actually quite confusing, one has to check the verb to see if it's a speaking verb (said, grumbled, whispered, etc.) or not a speaking verb to see which person's speech "Person A speech" was, if that made any sense. Each paragraph having only one person as the subject is much less confusing

Hm... a shadow person? DARK LINK!

You need to work on your formatting. When a new person starts talking, it should be in a new paragraph. Seeing two different people's dialogues in one chapter is confusing, and it's very annoying to read.

Why you do dis

Hey theree :) i recently fell in love with LoZ, but this story just did it for me. Im really lost for words at how beautiful and perfect the entire story was, and the ending made me tear :') well done (salutes)

I have loved this story from the very start, even if I stupidly asked you once if this was linked to the manga when it clearly was. Ever since then, I have come back to this story and fallen in love with it over and over again, and this story deserves so much respect. From the overall plot, dynamic relationships, epic battles, and incredible characters, this story will give me new surprises even when I know what's going to happen. Boosting this to 600 is the least that I could do :3

I have to do this: 600 reviews barely scrapes what this story deserves :3

A really good story you got here. Good read and very entertaining...Exellent work

Ahhhhh... Just finished your story, it was excelent pure perfection. Loved it, that's for writing it.

Oh that was an adorable end. Loved the story :D

Dude, man, you are right to call this story your baby. You wrote this really nicely and I'm sad to see it end, more importantly I'm how you ended it! Honestly, I prepared myself to see Link and/or Zelda dead, but this? This shot out of left field? DAMMIT! You made feel the feels for this one because of that ending. You didn't end it simply with "This story would continue on, later...", no you went forward to the end of OoT and completely filled my heart with feels. Simply brilliant! Nothing but praise. Finally, the last two paragraphs tore me apart! Simple and too the point on that, but it just conveyed so much meaning that one could only understand by reading this entire story! Man, you rocked this story, but more importantly, you made it your own and for that we thank you!

Why not use fairy? Lol I had like all my bottles full of them there easy to find to lol good story thou all the problems could be fix with Fairys lol