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Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
LOVE THIS!
EmptySurface chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
Awww. This is adorable. In a hair-curling, horrifying manner. :P

I mean, I love the sense of family, but Danny taking a shot to the head can never be a good thing. Kono's still alive, though, so... '

Thank you for writing and sharing this gem! I very much enjoyed reading it!
detectivejiju chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
Superb One-shot. I loved the way you wrote it... Could imagine it. The plot was awesome. Whump and Ohana was perfect. Enjoyed reading it. :)
AMMO121 chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
I loved this so much! Thank you! I would live too see Steve reaction too this! Haha!
spycat chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
This could pass as a episode on Hawaii Five 0. Great job with the story. I enjoyed it.
Tony WildRiver chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Moogs sweetie. Please employ this concept into future oneshots. You could even make it into a five and one if you felt like it: Five times Danny's dreams saved someone and one time their dreams saved him.
That is how fun of an idea this is; Reader wants more. Great job on Danny's pov! Fav for you!
celtics chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Bellissima storia veramente, nonostante la traduzione pessima di google quasi incomprensibile, e anche qui la generosità di Danny viene fuori per salvare la vita a Kono.
La Five-O è la sua famiglia e, come tale, rientra nei sogni premonitori della famiglia Williams quando uno della famiglia è in pericolo e poi Kono è un po' come la sua sorellina minore quindi...
Ciao alla prossima
mudstalker chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I loved this story! You did an awesome job with the dialogue and characterization. And the Lost reference made me laugh out loud!
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
This was SO fantastic! I had a friend rec it to me and I wasn't at all disappointed. This needs to be a real episode, because it was basically perfect. The pacing, flashbacks, descriptions, emotions, relationships - Danny and Kono's banter was PERFECTION. I liked everything about this, but a few line sin particular were my favs:

-"Kono is the top student at Steve McGarret's Academy of Learning to Kick Ass and Repress Your Emotions" - YES. So great.

-"The fact that Chin's watching that show about the plane crash victims stranded on a deserted island doesn't help; Danny would have a hard time following what's going on there even with a normal amount of sleep and a clear head and the sound on." - Aha! Lost reference! High-five. :D

-"The only meaningful things are said with explosions and acts of retaliatory violence. E-cards just don't cut it." - SO great.

So good! Awesome writing!

~Red
Witchy-grrl chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
OMG THIS NEEDS TO BE AN EPISODE. JUST SO I CAN FINALLY SEE SOME MENTION OF THE FALLOUT AND GET SOME GODDAMN CLOSURE.

GAAAAHHH this was amazing and perfect and LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your Danny!voice as well! :P Definitely going in my favs!
francis2 chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Great storyline! Danny's way of telling Kono she's family is a bit queer but it's a way. Love it!
LadyAilith chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Awesome tale! Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling. I really enjoyed it. :-)
crokettsgirl chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Beautifully written story, I enjoyed every part of it from the plot down to how well you have the characters. I liked how you did the dream and then the re enactment of it and the sudden realization to Danny about how and where Kono would be shot just in time to move her. Brilliant job. sue
Rogue Tomato chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
This was fantastic!
Pawthorn chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
Nice. And thanks for the Lost shout out :)
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