| Reviews for A Cloud in the Leaves |
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Monster King chapter 10 . 11/6/2018 Great job please continue it |
Hunterkiller1888 chapter 10 . 9/7/2018 This is my favorite pairing i wish it was more common |
Sieghard chapter 10 . 1/23/2018 Sorry but the idea of a T&I specialist kunoichi like Anko telling Naruto to not hit women us ridiculous, if he were to keep following such retarded teaching in a world where a monster like Tsunade exist he would end up killed. If anything Anko would have taught him to not hold back when hitting girls. Lastly it's rather lame that despite interacting with both Anko and Karui nothing really changed for Naruto, most of the story was the same as canon only with a girl beside him. |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/31/2016 UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate |
The Richmaster chapter 10 . 12/18/2015 This was an interesting chapter; I look forward to seeing how team interactions might be different. |
Windninja1000 chapter 10 . 12/17/2015 Great chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter! :D |
laughingfox31 chapter 9 . 10/2/2015 Hey what is wrong? I can listen if you need someone to talk to |
son of wind chapter 9 . 10/1/2015 Good to see your back, I really liked this story. I can lend an ear if you want, though I can't promise much else. All my other parts are currently in use... I'm sorry that was terrible. But in all seriousness I wouldn't mind a chat, I'm usually on in the evenings. |
LS14 chapter 9 . 10/1/2015 Its always good to see great stories such as yours coming back |
Zero Gawain chapter 9 . 10/1/2015 T_T ok... haku o.o |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/1/2015 Then, what team will Karui be on!? |
wolfbane chapter 8 . 8/20/2015 this was a good story until you stoped |
Jose19 chapter 5 . 7/26/2014 I want to see if Naruto and Karui actually pass the Academy, and what Team will they be assigned to the village. |
Jose19 chapter 4 . 7/26/2014 The girl Darui will have a tough time on the village because of the incident that Kumo created those years ago but in this story who is the Main character Naruto or Darui. |
Jose19 chapter 3 . 7/26/2014 I feel sorry for Karui because in the original story she acted so tough and was very direct with everyone she met and she fought Sakura and Naruto to gain the information on Sasuke. I wonder though how will the kids in the Academy react to her especially the Hyuga who hate Kumo with a vengeance because Neji blames them for his father's death. |