Good setup.

Hi !
Hooo i lové it !

Une fan ;)

cool

I think it's well done, but if there were more, then I'd happily read and enjoy it.

I hope your Muse decides to write a sequel to this, it's cute so far. Except for the coma-like state. Poor Jack and now he meets Xander. :-)

Sequel please? And all your disclaimers disclaim HP instead of Buffy _()

Would love to see where you take this! :-)

I like...lol, pretty funny.

Have to say that I wasn't sure what to expect. I agree with anyone who says there should be more of this, but that's up to you and your muse. But I hope she gifts you.

Thanks for the story. It was well done, and I heard the characters with their correct voices :-) (That doesn't happen when they're not done right)

Tom A.

Hi!

First I'd just like to commend your idea, it's brilliant! )Then I'd like to say that you can't demand that people "who want to play in this universe" let you know first since what you have here isn't so much a 'verse as it is an idea, and you can't really own an idea. You can copyright a body of work, but if you could truly own an idea fanficcers would be in deep dodo.

If I were you, I'd refrase that and say that if anyone wrote something using this idea, they should let you know so that you could read it, or something. I understand that you wouldn't want anyone to icontinue/i this particular story, like write a sequel.. if anyone did that to any of my stories I'd be livid, but claiming the right to this idea isn't of the good. Requesting links to any fic inspired by your idea is though, since that is more in the spirit of community we all enjoy so much, and not the greedy-author-wants-to-protect-their-work kind of spirit. I really hope that you understand what I'm trying to say.

I really enjoyed this story, it was interesting to see the "other side" of that chaos spell ) Because you're right, that soldier had to come from somewhere! I really hope that you decide to write that sequel, I'd love to see Xander and Jack getting to know each other, and the awkwardness that must be after spending 8 hours in somebody else's head. Even though Jack doesn't know much about Xander, Xander should know a great deal about Jack and his life.

I found some spelling and grammar mistakes, nothing major, but you might want to go through the story again and get it fixed. One thing that stood out was that you had written "he's" instead of "his" and "wander" instead of "wonder" (or was it the other way around?) Anyway... I bet you'd find the mistakes if you looked for them )

As a whole I have only good thisngs to say about this story. Good job!

And this review became much longer than I inteded... _'

Looks like a good start.

Awesome story.

Of course Xander showing up means that everything that Jack may have dismissed as a dream is real, not sure how well that would go down if you ever do a sequel.

it seemed like xander influenced jack a bit in the muppets discussion. would love a sequel story:)

very nice and i hope that sequel does happen

Fun and interesting, fitting end. Liked reading it. :D

Congrats and kudos!