Wow...I remember reading this a few years ago. It was one of my favorite stories out there! After this chapter I was in complete suspense over what would happen next? What other legendaries would show up? Would we see other generation Pokémon? At the time, I
had initially assumed only Gen 5 Pokémon might show up (I kept wondering other generations might but I guess that could come into conflict with the current lore in this story).

I always hoped to see it continue one day since it still has a lot of potential!

I now feel dumb. I didn't know it hasn't been updated in two years. :/

You return.. and you hit us with that... I'm happy your back.

But why you gotta go and kill him off...Seriously... DX

First Pokemon of Ash to be take out (nuzelocke style) also, since it seems you added Gen 5 pokemon, does that mean the Gen 5 Legendaries and their Dark forms will appear? Same goes with Gen 6 and 7. Also, i can almost see Dark Mewtwo the secondary main antagonist next to Dark Arceus, but I think what would be a really cool plot twist is have a Dark Variation of Ash himself, created from either the Sparrow Attack, the New Island Event, Beginning Tree or Arceus past for when he was created, and then be the one who escaped from being forced to be trapped and helped free Dadk Arceus and set every event in motion.

oh dear me, I am not sure how anyone can fix this... situation. oh my..

l love this story so much, please update this story! NOOOOO WARTORTLE! HE CAN'T BE GONE! :( it literally made me cry... I'm gonna miss him. :(

Oh no! Wartortle! D:

There's going to be character death in this story? Oh God, now I'm scared. ;_;

On another note, it's good to see you're back. :)

this is a really interesting story. some parts are confusing because of the large amount of characters and information, but im sure really good fans understand it. the action, comedy and emotions are also really good

WOOOO YAYYYY PIDGEOT IS BACKKK

all I can say is... OMG... I was nearly in tears by the end... despite the sad turn, I love your story. I think your writing has really evolved a lot since the start of it. Keep up the good work and keep posting! We want more!

Why

Noooo! Wartortle died! Poor Ash, he's so connected with his pokemon that this is tearing him apart. I do wonder how it happened... Anyway, Very good story, and looking forward to more!

Also, you might want to change the rating to M, since a character death is involved. Don't know the rules here, but just in case.

DAMN! That was something! Eagerly waiting for the next update. Man!

Not him