The best story, I loved It.

I will say, this is a very interesting story indeed and would suggest other people read it as well.

I personally couldn't enjoy it though. I just felt the Chatacters were Wayyy too sensitive. Otherwise, props to you dude! a lot of effort was put into it, And I'm glad a lot of people liked it. Hope you're proud of it

Very interesting, I honesty believe it could be an episode. I loved the six Noble gases. It was well written. I bet it helps the story go along, but I... I don't mean this in a bad way but everyone seemed a bit over sensitive. Nicole had every right to get angry, but everyone else could have sucked it up. No offense (I mean this in the nicest way possible)

Ok. My heart is literally stabbing with pain. And I’m crying. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. This is sad and I’m crying!? I can’t cry! It makes my eyes irritated! Ahhhhhh this is so saaaaad Damn you author!

Man, I am so INSPIRED by this story.

This is the BEST STORY EVER! Man, what a graceful ending. I wish that Accident story ended like this...

NOW I know why Gumball was stuck in that loop! His own mistakes caught up to him, trapping Gumball in the Loop.

Ok, so it's NOT Nemesis. It was caused by Gumball's own mistakes.
Looks like I was wrong...

I think I know what, or who's causing the time loop: Nemesis, Gumball's worst enemy!

Thanks for the comedic relief in Chapter 10. That was HILARIOUS!

go win the fanfiction prize bro (I am clapping for you) pls make sure it stays good

"sorry" you suck

"sorry" you suck

VARY NICE

why do I feel like the reason he is in a time loop is because of carry? this might just be me wanting to see the together, but I have noticed a lot of attention was on carry