I knew it!

It's really good. I love the way you describe Edward's relationship with the twins. And Andrew and Marie are adorable.

This is such a bullshit double fucking standard.. HE WAS DRUGGED! THEREFORE raped. THEREFORE he did not cheat.

I can't read this BS anymore.

Since when is being raped cheating?

Mother fucking double standards

I’m getting annoyed with Bella here. Edward DID NOT CHEAT ON HER AND SHE’S ACTING LIKE A VICTIM. Edward was drugged if he had any sex with Tanya, then it was RAPE because he was drugged . Why amid everyone still saying he cheated when Tanya drugged him.

Bella’s annoyed because he went out to celebrate his wedding. He has no way of know Tanya would do this to him.

Also I hate Carsile fir not telling Edward for 4 years about his twins. Then acting surprised when he ran into all them.

Hi,
I don’t know if you’ll be able to read this but I just want say that this is one of the first fanfics I’ve ever read and this is my favorite. I am grateful for writers like you who share your passion and work to everyone. I hope you’ll keep writing.

Hoping that we’ll get a glimpse of Edward and Bella’s story pre-One More Chance

Thank you for writing this story and You and Me as well ️ I wish you’ll continue that too someday x

Alice is hiding something. Does she know what happened to Bella.

Awesome story, glad that things worked out for them and they get a happy ever after and a bigger family. Keep up the good work!

What do I think? I think that yes Bella was hurt, but at some point she should have addressed the issue, and now she has his children. Keeping a man's children away from him, without him knowing they exist is one of the most horrific things a woman can do. This Bella...such a disappointment.

I loved this story so so soooooo very much. Thank you for sharing it.

Rebekah

If the whole family thought Edward had been drugged, how come no one has mentioned it previously?

Grammar nazi here. I know you're not a native English speaker, so I'm not going to nit pick absolutely everything. There is one that is driving me nuts, though. That is the use of "wanna". It's not really a word. It is a very informal contraction of "want to". It is occasionally seen in dialogue, especially when used by a whiny child, but it is not appropriate for narrative. That should always be "want to". Not sure if you'll ever see this, as I know this is an old story and I'm not sure if you are even active on the site any more, but at least I've said my piece.

Bella will probably find the winters mild in Toronto compared to Ottawa. They're much worse, and with a lot more snow. Toronto is actually the hot spot of southern Ontario when it comes to winter weather. I've lived in Toronto for many years, and have enjoyed visualizing the places mentioned.

Edward is a doctor. He should know that Carlisle could not legally tell him anything about Bella due to privacy laws as he was a treating physician on her case as well as Marie's. Carlisle could have lost his medical license if it ever came out that he had violated privacy laws. Poor Carlisle was completely in between a rock and a hard place here.

I loved the happy ending but I didn’t like the conversation with Charlie. What reason did Charlie have to not like Edward in the beginning? That is just wrong. I know it seemed like they were jumping into things so not liking the time line was understandable but not liking Edward because of it was wrong. Then he threatens him and doesn’t want to know what happened. Bella should have told him what happened already and to not take it out on Edward.