Wow. That was intense. Enjoyed it.

whoa, she is really darkside here. Killing her own men so carelessly, not only dark but foolish considering she's depleting her own forces.

Anyway, this was well done, you could almost feel Morgana's fury

Interesting

You should call the series 'Don't doubt your destiny'.

This was another interesting story, poor Morgana, she was so awesome before she turned evil and now I pitty her. Anyways, thanks for writing this (off to read more of your awesome stuff)

I like your protrayal of Morgana! It might not exactly like she is in the series, but its very close. I think the main difference being your protait of her would better fit her in season 5. Her insanity hadn't progressed to that point yet in season 4

morganna really needed the benefit of some family counseling.

well done.

Ooooh, that was chilling. I thought you captured Morgana very well! Though I will never quite forgive the series for turning Morgana into a bad guy when they had Morgause to play with and could have kept them seperate like the very oldest tales...for fitting in the world as it is, this is very well done! You can really feel Morgana's hatred here and I, as always, feel pity for her. Its fantastic :).

I love this! Very solid Morgana, as it kind of scared me. Especially where she... murdered Lylwd(?). Personally, I'm not too sure I spelled that right. Poor guy.
I think her finding-out was realistic, and I have to say it might've taken myself longer as I'm usually slow on this uptake but this is MORGANA and she's awesome in that villian/baddie way.
Don't shoot the messenger. Or the reviewer! :D

I think that this story is perfect for a prequel for Heart of Gold. I have now literally fit all the pieces together. Merlin being made Court Sorcerer, Morgana finding out, and then Heart of Gold. So, Kay is working for Morgana (right?) and now she's heading for Camelot, does this mean she's going to try and bring him to her side? No... he wouldn't! But then, that leads to my request. Battle! Morgana vs. Merlin! YE! PM me xx

… Depressing.

ABSOLUTELY SPECTACULAR! :P

That was kinda scary, actually. Morgana . . . has . . . issues;)

Morgaaaaanaaaaaaaa haha OF COURSE she's never heard the phrase 'don't shoot the messenger.' Typical. Is there ever going to be a Morgana/Merlin face-off in any of your stories? Because that would be EPIC. (Though Merlin would win, because he's MERLIN. I mean, just in his lesson to Enya there was an amazing display of power). In the show, I hope they save their CGI budget for that showdown, because it definitely warrants more than just chucking each other around with magic like their last duel. Let's have more fireballs and lightning and magical awesomeness like the Nimueh duel, yes? Because I've never seen so many people being knocked out just by being knocked over and it's getting a bit ridiculous.

ANYWAY, solid bit of writing as per usual. Morgana is her usual heartless, bitchy self that we've all come to hate and love. Great job! 3

Fantablous! Love it. Great gear up to Saturday. :)