Reviews for A Trip Down Privet Drive
webhead.bugboy chapter 1 . 7/25
This is really great. Everyone was pretty in character and the entire thing was interesting. I liked how you had Petunia apologize. She was horrible to Harry and I don’t think a simple apology is enough but you also added that she would like to see him again, which I believe is a much better way to show him that she’s sorry. What I really wanted to say, and I’m sorry for getting off track, was good job and well done.
Tonirae chapter 1 . 7/3
Love it! One of the best 'returning to Privet Drive' stories yet! By the way, what is AVPM?
Zara chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
I always thought petunia was a bit of an nmom (narcissistic mother) and Vernon was either an ndad or an E (enabler) with LOTS of issues of his own. I seriously doubt that she would be so accepting of Harry and his friends, considering that he was the scapegoat AND an “extension” of the sister she was so jealous of. Harry and Dudley fit very well into the scapegoat/golden child archetypes. Something tells me that if Petunia had another child, she’d’ve abused it as much as she does Harry. She’s a raging narc, and she only uses Harry as an outlet for her narcissism; it’s just that now, she has a “valid” excuse in the eyes of Vernon and Marge (and the fandom that forgive her so readily for her shitty behaviour In the end). Either way, Vernon and the like would enable her.

It’s quite a bit of a sad story. I think Dudley knows that their love is conditional. That if one day he were to get magic and another child were to come along that was “perfect”, he’d be subjected to similar scapegoating. That’s why he bullies Harry, so he can stay in his parent’s favour. It’s common among golden children.

Cheers
HPandPJO4ever chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
This is really good!
NCIS Obsession chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
I realized a fee paragraphs in that I had read it before but couldn't stop so I read it all again. I love everything about it, great job.
LemurGirl chapter 1 . 7/26/2017
This was such a good story! I really enjoyed reading it. Most Dudley redemption fics that I've read focus on later in his life (as I'm also a fan of him having a magical child!) so this was a nice change of pace. It was interesting to see how he would behave directly after the events in book seven as opposed to many years later. I thought you did a really good job at showing Harry's hesitancy to return, as well as his forgiving nature. All of the characters were perfectly in character! Sorry that this is a bit of a long, rambling review, but I just wanted to tell you all of the reasons why I loved your story!
MarbleWolf chapter 1 . 6/26/2017
This actually made me cry lol I'm super emotional today
name chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
it was very very good
Lily chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
I love this so much!:3
le jinnxy chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
This is probably one of the most awesome family get-togethers that I've read yet. Petunia is one of my favorite characters when she's not being a bitch.

Anyways, awesome job3
David Alexander chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
I LOVED THIS! This was everything I wished for! You are a AMAZING Writer!
Connwaer Heap chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
I liked it. It was sweet and sad and well-written. And no, I've never AVPM, so I didn't catch the reference.
KiwiSaladFace chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
This is where I computer hug you. Really, really, hard. :D That was AWESOME! Thank you :)
Just plain crazy chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
How the heck can I NOT read it to the end, and how in the deepest pits of hell could I not like it!? I think it's amazingly accurate, J.K. Rowling could not have done it better!... And that is about the highest compliment I can give you. Sorry, I don't know anything better.
sailormoonserenity99 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
This is amazing.
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