| Reviews for Konoha no Nidaime Kiiroi Senkou |
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natsuzamaki chapter 19 . 6/21 You sure it's not on hiatus? You haven't updated for years. This is a literally amazing book, keep it up. |
natsuzamaki chapter 14 . 6/20 Since the whole thing is in bold, I didn't even realise that the reports ended and the author's note began |
natsuzamaki chapter 2 . 6/18 Its great |
blklover chapter 19 . 6/5 . |
Nik1627 chapter 19 . 4/4 Really good story! Please continue! |
Paul Lenzen chapter 19 . 2/13 Okay this is really good and I need more. Please update soon. |
Terrifix chapter 19 . 1/6 Damn, I really like this story. |
copet chapter 19 . 11/5/2019 Great chapters! I really like how light and fulfilling the story vibe is! I would think it's between a light drama and a light comedy. The style uses well what one already knows of the Naruto series while explaining enough to not be in the dark. Also, you make a strong young Naruto without making him overpowered, just having a really convenient tool. Keep with the good work! :) |
bananahead1 chapter 4 . 8/22/2019 you use his tick way to much its not that bad just when he says something he has a lot of conviction about |
bananahead1 chapter 3 . 8/22/2019 huh I wonder what type of kids 5 year olds produce together cuz it's obvious your hinting that they are hormonal early than expected |
bananahead1 chapter 3 . 8/22/2019 wait A respects minato not hates him |
Hinata Snape chapter 19 . 6/24/2019 love love love this story. everybody else can suck it. |
Just4fun23000 chapter 17 . 5/5/2019 Chapter 17 and Naruto is still a kid? I'm done… I've just wasted a few good hours of my life because i wanted to see where this story was going. I wanted to see if you would make Naruto a Jonin sensei for the other kids his age, or if you would make him the youngest Hokage in the history of the Elemental Nations. But i got a little kid, an annoying, stupid and bratty little kid. Chapter 17 and Naruto is still not allowed to speak a cuss word. He is a Shinobi, old enough to drink, old enough to kill, and old enough to date, but he cannot curse *facepalm*. And in the next chapter Naruto and his friends are going to build a sandcastle and have a nice day at the beach, but of course Mother Kakashi is going to make sure that the kiddies behave... that was a joke but this story honestly seems to be going that way. |
Just4fun23000 chapter 8 . 5/5/2019 Seriously, how long are you going to have us read a kindergarten tale? I did not come to read a story in which Naruto is supposed to be better than his cannon self only to see an idiotic cardboard cutout of a happy and loving little kid! Make a goddamned time-skip, or whatever, and give us an adult or at least teen Naruto that is an actual Shinobi and not a brat. There is NO action, NO romance, NO story progression and a ****load of uninteresting OC's that i honestly couldn't give a damn about. Having Naruto be a sheltered kid despite the training he went through is only hurting your story, I'm surely not the only one that doesn't want to read about a five or six year old Naruto for more than one chapter. I can understand the kid-Naru trope in flashbacks and/or prologues but not in the actual story. Reading about a kid in a grownups world might be interesting if the kid is someone like Itachi or Kakashi, two men that had to grow up too soon, but not Naruto, especially with the personality you gave him. You had him be trained by an ANBU and still he is all sunshine and rainbows? That's got to be a joke… Now yes, I hate Angsty Naruto stories as much as the next true Naruto fan, but you should've at least made Naruto somewhat reasonable. You claim that he is such a GREAT genius that he outclasses both Kakashi and Minato and yet you make him have troubles spelling words? It's a bit unreasonable in my opinion especially considering that at the age of six Kakashi was a Chunin, someone that had already fought and KILLED a number of enemy Shinobi. |
Marie-S-Raven chapter 19 . 3/20/2019 Ohhh, this is SUCH a good story! |