16 years after... i read this story and i love! I hope that in future you will compleated this story!

Fantastic! Only sad, that you're not finishing it! Please more!

was supposed to say 'love it, can not wait for more' on post in ch 11.

love it, can not wait for more.

AWESOME! You have got to finish this one, it is just too exciting to end there. I love the way you entertwined the different characters and I am in a desperate need to see Jared's reaction. Great writing all the way around on this one.

Thanks for sharing...

Sid

Interesting story. For the most part well written but some spelling errors. Kept me interested...but what happened? Is it finished?

spatula spatula,

I've just been rereading the fics I've got saved on my comp, and I still love this one! Thinking about finishing it? I'd LOVE to know what it ends! (Hey, it's been 2 years since I've done anything w/ MINE, so I know I can't complain.. :p)

Thanks! Love to know the verdict!

~crackerjacknpez

P.S. I'm currently working on mine again! ;-)

Especially the Jarod and Miss Parker interaction is so in character, their cat and mouse game never ends, or does it?

Just one thing, if Margaret had a miscarriage in December 27, 1959, how could Jarod possibly had been born May 17, 1960? I mean, if also adding into the equation that they waited for 2 months before they tried again.. humanoids are after all pregnant for 9 months, no? Or have I misunderstood those dates and circumstances? I must admit I read this story very quickly, such a consuming story.

..and I'll also plead for a continuation of this superb story.

Pretty please?

This is amazing. I really hope you do update, even though it has been so long.

Any plans on finishing this story? I really liked it a lot. Pretty please, post new parts. I know it's been a year but its never too late to beg. lol Thanks.

I know I am reading this story a lot later then your post date, but I wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it so far. I saw in the discription it should go to chapter 18 instead of just the 11 it does now. Do you have these? Or are you finished with this story at this time? Thanx,

Ann

Very good!

I can't wait to read more of this story! :)

Just one thing - you had Parker shot in her right arm by Lyle, then you said left. :) Which is it? :)

Other than that... I really enjoyed the story & can't wait to read more! :)

Loved the story. It's one of my favorites. I hope you are working on the new part and are going to post it very soon. :)

This story is by far one of the best Pretender fics I've ever read. I just blew an entire thirty minutes worth of research time, but for me it was definitely worth it. Don't you feel privleged-you beat out Emily Dickinson in my importance scale. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

What a great story.! I can't wait to find out

what happens next. Thanks for your efforts.