Ive just seen that you recommended my story! Thank you so much! I havent written or even been on here for a long time but i had a review today and i saw so many that said they gave my story a chance because you recommended it so thank you so much! I dont even know of youll see this but just know i appreciate it :)

Wow I'm so impressed by the change in Bella from the first chapter. You developed her character beautifully.
Hope Springs seems like such a wonderful place with great people.

I loved how your story developed over years and you continued after Bella and Edward fell in love.

It's such a wonderful story even from the begining when Bella found an angel in Billy. I was wondering what happened to him. He was an important character but the last few chapters there wasn't a mention of him.

It was so sad when Bella lost the baby, however the story would have ended up very different if the pregnancy went full term. Bella was not ready for the baby nor did she understand how to be a mother. I know natural instincts and stuff but Esme and the family showed her so much. Most importantly how to love.

The first time Edward left Bella I didn't initially understand it. I was like why didn't he just speak to her? Although I am glad he did. I feel like Bella wouldn't have found herself and what she wanted to do with her life.
She needed space to figure herself out and Edward needed space to stop his sexual fantasies (it was odd at the begining especially since Edward compared her to his barely teen sister) but of course all things fictional.
The second time they seperatrd I was a bit confused by it. I'm not sure if it was needed but they both seemed happier after.

The pre wedding chapters- oh my what a disaster, such drama but so fun to read. So glad you pushed the sister (I forgot her name) out the way quickly.

The entire story was great. I felt Edwards character was immature (but boys for you) and same with Bella. The non communication was so frustrating.

Loved the ending. Glad to see they built a lovely family (4 kids just like Esme and Carlisle).

Overall the characters you built were fun, crazy and some out right odd but I loved them all. Loved the idea of a big family who support eachother.
Anyway sorry for the long review your story is packed with so much.

Does Edward usually go for girls who look as young as his 14 year old sister? He is 28, right. I would not trust this Edward alone with my young nieces.

Edward's lust for Bella makes me want to protect her. She has been protecting her virtue nearly all her life from dirty lecherous guardians. She does not really trust men or people, for that matter. She is pregnant and abandoned by its father. I think, the last thing she needs is Edward thinking of her as a sex object. It just seems insensitive and inappropriate.

HOW COULD YOU MAKE HER LOOSE THE BABY.

terriblement formidable. un pur bonheur de lecture!

J'adore les POV de Roscoe! Ce chien est terrible :-))

Wahouuuuu, ces deux derniers chapitres sont intenses et hyper émouvant. Mon paquet de mouchoirs y est passé!

J'adore votre histoire. Même si la traduction Google n'est pas fidèle à rentre la fluidité de vos écrits, ont comprends bien la profondeur des sentiments que vous faites ressentir.
Merci pour tout cela.
Salutations de France (Gabian-Hérault)

Oh, this story is so heartwarming, it brings tears to my eyes. They are all so loving and trying so hard to help Bella. Her life has been so hard!

Just found your story. So loved it. Bella had hard life and learned to trust again. Edward had to learn to They learned this together and sometimes the hard way. Continue writing stories.

Beautiful story

There is nothing more annoying than a person apologizing but saying they were right at the same time. I’m glad Bella kicked Edward in the nuts. I don’t know what it is about Twilight stories but I read so many where the lady tells the man to get out and he refuses. Do women find that romantic? Ireally am genuinely interested and curious because it seems to me that it is incredibly disrespectful.

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everyone has Beautiful Children's

Thanks for sharing !

A great read from start to finish X