Awsome again keep em coming!

Wow! This is really good! Really sad! South just wants to help. Don't know much background info (as you know) so I'm really cirri us as to what the AI (think along the lines of that being a voice in his head like a conscience but it's a robot) is putting him though at night. Amazing and cool! Sorry it's taking so long for me to review to all of your work, life is hectic :/

This is great :)

awesome! i love it. it is well written. is Shana south's real name? or did you just kinda make it up? :P