Very good

cool story bro, this as awesome , five star work

Great story! I've been searching for such a story for soooo long. There are many lemon stories about this lovely couple, but it's really hard to find one that captures the personalities of these characters, plus the way you ended it was a very nice touch! I can totally see this going on with Aang. . . he's super sweet but when it comes to Katara he does have a little dirty mind! Thanks for writting, you've done a very good job!

it was awsome

Hi what was the dream about tho plz tell me thx- savannah

Good

show some pics

awesome dude ;-) liked the twist at the end

hey i'm the one who reviewed your story about adding onto it email me at tell me or on my facebook gieco greco my pic that has a angel sitting in the grass

I love the you make the story sound almost realistic as if it really were part of the show but i saw alot of grammar errors and one or two spelling errors if you fix those it will be even better and you should add on to the story like talk about the next day have them try and confess that they want to fuck again and again also have like a coupledays pass then have Aang ask Katara for her hand in marriage

oh i want to fuck katara hard out

The whole thing was good, but the ending was pure, sweet, & a little sweet. It made me want to cuddle with a certain lady.

A very well written story.

Please continue!

Awww, that wasn't fair...it least for aang...:)

I really liked how you made the descriptions. It really pulls us nicely into his head. And he's in character.

Awww! The ending was adorable! But the main text? OMFGBBQ! I've actually started to write my own Kataang but this was a wonderful introduction!