This whole thing was so good; your prose, the characters, th s, everything.

The way this tied in hurt me physically and you bet damn as hell, emotionally.

My babies never get a happy ending and for some reason, I was hoping they would, by some miracle. It's bittersweet, their love, their ending. But damn, if that doesn't make me love them even more.

Thank you for this wonderful piece. ~

I feel like you made this just to mess with my feels.

OMG WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME!KJAKGFKAJGFJHDGFJHDJGFJGS OH MY FUCKING GODS I SHIP THEM TOGETHER TO TARTARUS AND BACK OKAJGFJHD ICANT EVEN

this was amazingly written and amazingly heartbreaking. i love it :) amazing job :)

I was hoping Luke would come back into the story. :) But why. Whywhywhy. I think I will go cry now.

YOURE JUST LIKE UNCLE RICK! TOYING WITH MY EMOTIONS AND MAKING ME CRY LIKE THIS!

Why? Tears are flowing like crazy now and its all your fault.
Hope your happy.

I have nothing to say other than this was absolutely amazing. Just ahh. Love.

fml this is perfect.

I love how no matter what, everything for Percy always leads back to this.

you are a cruel person breaking all those hearts. (shakes head in disapointment)

The last bit broke my heart :'(

Gaaaaaa, I loved it so much! This is so perfect! Definitely one of my favorite oneshots! Pleeeeeeaaaaaase do more like this! It was such a great read- so emotional while being perfect for Percy's mortal life, I need more!

Woah , im completely blown away x) . It was so sad ! And sweet at the same time . A really well written one - shot . Definitely one of the best I read :D

Not going to cry. I'm not going to cry, I totally cried. TT Damnit, I though Jonah would or that French guy would be the one. -sniffle- Luke in his kickassery has to ruin it. -sniffle- Why!

Very good stories like all your other words. I'm a giant fan though I lurk more than review. Karl and Percy were my favorite. That childhood innocence is adorable. :3

I'm still crying.

Till Next Time,

*Chaos' Mistress*

I'm just sitting here, weeping, no big deal. No worries. You totally just made me cry horrible, ugly tears.

It was so beautiful. I just wanted things to work out.