It was beautifully written, just so damn sad.

I frigging hate sad stories.I hate them,I hate !

Why?

Crap!

Stage- that referring to Cancer? does one of them get cancer after finding happiness?

Is there enough for both of them to stay together till the end?

Sad...but still wonderful.

Welp, I knew it had angst but I thought "how bad can it be?" Now I'm typing this with tears in my eyes... Damnit... Really beautiful especilally with each chapter being a drabble. I didn't think it would flow together at all. I have to admit. I thought the daughter's name was going to be cassandra.

Short, sweet and sad. You made me laugh and cry, for that i must thank you.

If this was pre-written why didn't you upload it as a one-shot?

love it

I wasn't sure I'd like this when I clicked on it, but I'm glad I did. I'm not a big fan of unhappy endings, but then again life isn't a fairytale either. I really did enjoy reading this though. :)

If the chapters get longer, I think that I'll like this.

You've gutted me. Wow.

Such beautiful love and now it's gone. I'm broken for them.

Beautifully written.

xoxo

This part totally breaks me: "Natalia asks me where Mama went. When Mama will be home. Can she kiss Mama goodnight?" I can't even imagine trying to explain death to a child. And to be the child without a mother or father? Dude, I can't even... I'm a sobbing mess right now.