WHAT A TWIST!
I LIKE IT!

OMG! I'm crying! She never got to tell him! It's so sad! And this is all I ever asked... I've been searching for a fic where Jenny, The Doctor and River bonding or just talking all three together and I finally found it! Seriously! This was perfect! ツツツ Now I only wish you would write a sequel even if it is a short one, with more River/Jenny. It would be Perfect!

Jenny is half River? Now that I can

Brilliant!

Awesome theory, brilliant story. I love the idea of Jenny and River acting like a mother and daughter for some reason and I think you portrayed it very well.

This is good - no this is REALLY good! Please Continue!

Wow! I love it! Especially the bit at the end and when Amy shouts at the Doctor! :)

Absolutely wonderful!

This story is so awesome! Just River rescuing Jenny - and for the first time seeing River using the Time Lord sense to find one another - is a great read with them going to the Doctor. "But you can call me Mom if you like. It will drive him mad."

But that scene on Messaline... that they lost a child and she makes it possible for Jenny to be theirs. I so wish that was true!

This is great. Well written, amazing concept and makes perfect sence.

Damn! I love this idea! I mean, really. That's just awesome. :D

Great job! That's such a clever idea!

That was so great! I love it!

I like it. Really, that's so perfect for Jenny.

Interesting theory and very well written! I enjoyed it very much.