Omg wut Logan have wing wut the fuckkkkkkkkkkkkk

I usuaully don't like Logan sickfics but this was so perfect! It was cute and funny and so entertaining. A job well done!

Awww! I love it!

I like the story. Good example of peer pressure and typical teenaged behaviour. I also like the others caring for Logan. Only thing I don't like: It should be more clear how the peer pressure was a REALLY bad thing this time - the three are only sorry because Logan feels bad, barely noticable because they pushed him into it.

Oh wow this was great! In favor of reviewing my story, I will review yours! I absolutely love the way you write. It is so good. I'm never lost with the flow or what's going on, and you use a ton of vocabulary that just makes the story a whole lot better.

Also, this was seriously sweet. I think I just gained 4 cavities from the way you write the boys. They even all had their little 'bromance' moments in the fic. This was great, I loved it!

lol lol lol This was too funny! Great job!

Like I wrote you I LOVE this fanfic!

It's gorgeous! 3

You've done such a great job ) hope you'll write more )

Sry if my review isn't that great but I'm not the "I-love-to-write-a-review" type ... Cause I'm german I think my english sucks so if I'm right sorry for that '

Have a great day )

Greets!

Echizen

Stupid... But funny.

This story. Oh my word. It's the greatest. It's just, fabulous! My gracious, where'd you learn to write like that, girl? ahaha. :)

The whole setup intro thing is really good. I love all the descriptions.

You're such an eloquent writer, I just love your style!

LOL Oh my gosh, I laugh so hard when they're pressuring Logan to drink it. It's too funny! And what jerks! lol.

I loved "and, uh, herbs and stuff!" XD

The characterization of all of them is perfect and hilarious.

AW, poor Logie... I am loving all these descriptions. :) They are awesome

And OH MY GOSH I love and laugh so hard at and love to death the part where Kendall's helping James with the mopping! ! It's such in-character, funny, sweet stuff, I just... I'm just a sucker for Kendall/James bromance anyway, but this was hilarious and amazing. akeialnwcowaihvcaaam

And then the end, AWWWWWWWW! :'} SO SWEET, perfect last line.

This story deserves a way longer, better review, sorry about that.

You said on your profile that you weren't the best author out there or whatever... but seriously... you're really good. One of the best I've seen on the site anyway. I'm not kidding, this is so well done. You should post more stuff. :)

This story is so funny and cute! :D

ok. this has to be one of the most... no the most amazing fic i have ever read. its so descriptive, and unlike a lot of people on FF you are actually a talented writer. the way you kep everyone in character so well astounds me. cheesy as is sounds, you have a gift my friend. i love logan sick fic, and you are brilliant at writing it. please write more! my favourite bit had to be where kendall found james with the safety goggles. i can totally picture james doing that. thank you so much for writing this! it is amazing! :D

OMG. Logan gets his wings! LOL. This sounds interesting. Therefore, I shall read. I’m going to cry laughing just reading the title though…. I don’t know. It’s funny. C’: And since you wrote it for my big sissy Channy, I shall read. And ALSO since you are a loyal reviewer and an AWESOME friend, I shall read. YAY! Lol. Anyways, on with the story. :3 (I’m reviewing while reading. SO. AMAZING. Lol.)

LOL. He’s studying everything in that Red Bull, huh? Awe, Logan’s so cute! Aha! I love it!

OMG, I love it. “He was the smart one, the brainy one; the cautious, and sensible, logical one…But above all these things, Logan Mitchell was, and undeniably so, one other thing first: A boy. And as careful as he was, as brilliant as he was, as rational as he was, there were always those nights on rare occasion where smarts flew out the window; caution was thrown to the wind, reason was gone—And boy took over.” I love that. OMG. I love it, Emmaleigh! I love it! It’s just so good! I don’t know, I just love it!

Logan is like me. A spoil sport when it comes to getting high—not literally—off energy drink. BUT! I prefer soda so I don’t think we’re alike in THAT sense… but still. Logan, you silly derp. C’:

LOL. AN EVEN MORE HYPER CARLOS. I’m going to cry from laughing now, thanks, Emmaleigh, thanks. :P

“Drink it.” I’m going to cry from laughing. I’m going to cry. “Drink it.” I CAN SOOO PICTURE JAMIE’S SEXY LIL’ VOICE SAYING THAT. “Drink it.” AHAHAHA. I love it. I don’t know, I’m weird. But I love it so much! And then Logan starts tracing down all the ingredients… little smart dork. It’s so funny. I’m going to laugh crying. I mean I’m going to cry laughing. LOL ~ I LOVE THE WORLD. Lol, I’m acting like I just got high off Red Bull just reading this.

These boys are rebellions… I am even more in love, thanks for that. LOL.

Logan called them science experiments… he’s so… nerdy… I love it… I love it! You are going to kill me with this, Emmaleigh, and I’m not even halfway through!

“Um, it has vitamins.” STOP! YOU’RE GOING TO KILL ME! “gink-o-blah-go-something…” STOP! STOP IT! AHAHAHA. I’M GONNA DIE. ~ LOL. “Caffeine increases urination.” No wonder I need to pee all the time… TOO MUCH INFORMATION. OMG. LOL. SEE, LOOK WHAT YOU’RE DOING TO ME EMMALEIGH! AHAHAHA. PEE OURSELVES TO DEATH. I’MA CRY.

…Can you really pee to death…?

What’s a pansy? AHAHA. OMG. “Says the dude who shaves his legs.” STOP TRYING TO KILL ME! “Girl-legs!” AH. STOP. I’M GONNA DIE.

Yes, Logan, you are smart. But I think you will like it because apparently, according to the title that Emmaleigh has given this, you are going to get your wings. Ahaha! Oh my gosh, I’m going to cry from laughing! “Then do it.” AHHH. I’M GONNA CRY FROM LAUGHING. I DON’T EVEN KNOW IF IT’S SUPPOSED TO BE FUNNY. D:

Virgin drinker. AH. HAH. HAH.

I CAN SO IMAGINE LOGES GOING, “OOH!—WHAT? Ya like that? YA LIKE THAT?” That sounds so much like him! Good job for awesome in-character-ness! :3

He crashed… the cans… against… his head?

…

…

…

I think. You’ve just passed the limit. Of killing me. I think. I just went on the seventh level of Heaven because I died so many times. Um. I’m past the universe now. I’m going to die for the umpteenth time from this, and I’m STILL not even HALFWAY done reading this! I am going to die. I am dead. I’ve died thirteen million bazillion times and it’s ALL YOUR FAULT, EMMALEIGH! …No, I’m just kidding. c’: But really, I’ve died six thousand million five hundred billion katrillion times.

“Red Bull gave him wings. And if Logan didn’t know better, he’d think he could fly.” STOP IT. AHAHAHAHA.

Logan is going crazy.

HE’S GOING CRAZY.

And I love it so much. AHHHH. “I gotta pee so bad!” THIS IS SO FUN TO READ. I AM ENJOYING THIS WITH MY WHOLE LIFE RIGHT NOW. AHHHH.

Oh, no. Is gaining wings now affecting Logan’s brain? :’c LOL. Awe, poor thing, I think… I think his head is hurting now. OMG. It’s kicking in. ~ The overdose of Red Bull is kicking into him now. And he needs to go pee again. COOL STORY, BRO. LOL. AHAHA. PEE. PEE, PEE, PEE! :3 Sorry. I’m immature…

OH NO. HIS HEART. IS BEATING. FAST. –cries-

"…I—I feel weird." Logan conceded; beginning to sound panicked. He glanced up at Kendall, worriedly, "I don't feel g-good." Okay, right about here is where I want to reach my hand into the computer, grab him, and hold him and hug him and love him forever. OMG. Dude, I am not laughing anymore… :’c I feel so bad for Logan and I wanna cry now because it’s so sad… :’c AWE. POOR Logan.

Okay, so, this sounds weird but I love how you described him throwing up.

And I love how you freaking … I love this… little… thingy… right here: “Logan whimpered as hands yanked him up under his armpits, hauling him through the kitchen at arms' length. He closed his eyes to the spinning, jerky imagery whirling around him in his daze. A flurry of frantic voices filled his ears, meshing with the sound of something splashing and splattering around him; the loud clank of the toilet lid being flung up as he was dropped on his knees in front of it.”

I love that.

I don’t know why.

But I do. ;)

Uhm, okay. That just broke Caitee’s little heart because he’s screaming and crying and he said ow and he’s coughing into a bowl and I wanna cry. He’s just… puking… a lot… and it’s making me sad because I LOVE Logan and I don’t like seeing the poor boy in distress and discomfort and sickness. :’c It’s so sad. WHY AM I TALKING? I am torturing Logan in one of my stories and I’m talking. WOW. BUT LIKE… I’M SORRY, BUT THIS IS SAD AND I’VE BEEN KILLED FOR THE UMPTEENTH TIME, THANKS VERY MUCH. D:

Awe, Kendall’s taking care of Logan. Cute, cute, cute. Awe. Awe. Awe.

LOL SATAN. AHHH. IT’S RETURNING TO FUNNINESS AGAIN AND I’M GONNA DIE FROM LAUGHTER. SATAN. OMG, OH, EMMALEIGH, YOU WRITE LOGESTER ABSOLUTELY PERFECTLY.

Poor baby, the caffeine is dreadfully affecting him. poor. Freaking. Baby. Poor freaking baby! :’c I want to hug him. awe. Awe. Awe. Awe. Awe. I can say awe a hundred times without stopping but that would just make the review very retardedly redundant and crappy.

AHAHAHAHA. LOL. DON’T STEP ON THAT. AHAHA. James IS SOOO FUNNY. I’M GONNA CRY. LOL AND James IS GONNA PUKE TOO. HALLELUJAH, LOL.

James… in yellow gloves… a purple bandana… and… safety… goggles…?

I think I just died again.

LOL, James is throwing a freaking tantrum. Can I just say that James tantrums are the most brilliant things ever known to woman/girl and I’m so glad you made him have a freakout in this story? I LOVE IT. I AM SO HAPPY. AHAHAHA. THIS IS SOOOO FUNNY, I’MA CRY. ~ But it’s sad too. BUT IT’S FUNNY TOO. Okay, I’m indecisive now, is this sad or is it funny? No, I’m not a Gemini… Let’s just say it’s BRILLIANT. ;D

“Taking you to bed, Logan.” …I just died again. I JUST DIED.

"No matter how nerve-wracking, trouble-causing, pain-inflicting, emotionally distressing, vomit-inducing…" AND I DIED AGAIN.

AND NOW IT’S OVER SO I’M OFFICIALLY DEAD.

I love this. I am so in love with this. I will never, ever forget this oneshot ever. I will read it over and over and over again. OMG. DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS? THIS IS SOOOO AWESOME, I LOVE IT. Red Bull gives you wiiiings! ~ AHAHAH. And Logan got them, gaaah; I’m so glad that’s Red Bull’s motto, and I’m so glad Logan posted it, and I’m so glad those things brought you to the idea of this story. AND THANK YOU FOR MAKING CHANNY HAPPY ~



Can you tell I’m in love? LMAO.

Ok funny story I had the hardest time trying to figure out what in the world this story was called. I thought it said Logan gets his willings and I had no idea what it meant and it just NOW dawned on me that red bull gives people wings haha.

Awe oh my gosh! Your authors note made me so happy!

Ahhh peer pressure, don't go to the dark side Logan!

How could anybody drink those nasty things? it's disgusting! Ewwwwww omgomg ew.

Haha James. "Drink it" lol.

Honestly Logan sugar would be the least of my worries in those nasty things.

Lol Carlos and James are so funny!

Ok seriously the way you describe Logan gearing up to drink red bull is exactly like me bahahaha! It was dead on!

Uh oh Logan's starting to feel it :/

Oh my gosh you really scared me with the stomach pumping stuff and how sick you described Logan.

"Whoa," The leader exclaimed, "Loge, what's up?" He set the arm-load of goodies down, hurrying over beside the boy. He sandwiched the smaller one's torso between two hands, one on his chest, one on his back, supporting the trembling kid; and looked on the little teen's flushed, red-splotched face with concern." - I love picturing this in my head!

"…I—I feel weird." Logan conceded; beginning to sound panicked. He glanced up at Kendall, worriedly, "I don't feel g-good." He slid to the floor just inside the living room, burying his dizzy head into his knees."- Awe, oh baby Logan! Awe "I feel weird" you are killing me here in a veryyy good way.

Omg that was the best puke build up ever I love it haha!

Logan whimpered as hands yanked him up under his armpits, hauling him through the kitchen at arms' length" - Lol awe! I pictured Kendall carrying him like a wet puppy or something like eww don't let it drip on me! Hahaha! I feel soo bad for Logan right now, this is terrible in the best way EVER.

Oh he's throwing up so hard :( :(

Whoa! "Logan shivered as sweat prickled the back of his neck, tingling past his hairline; his brown eyes leaking tears as he raised his head briefly to glance up at Kendall, "Why did you guys let me do this?" He screamed. "Why the crap did you let me do that?" He wailed mournfully, breaking into sobs. His stomach squeezed again and he grabbed the sides of the toilet, ducking his head back in to be sick some more. "…Ow." He moaned, coughing into the bowl." - No joke, this is the best sick fic paragraph I have ever read, ever! YESSSS! This is exciting me so much.

Kendall is being amazing.. And the satan... Oh man Emmaleigh this rocks so much!

I love when they are tying to dress him. Love, love, love. Perfect imagery with his head popping out of green cuddly thermals...

Yay James and Carlos are being sweet, I love it!

Why are they so cute? Gah I love love love the ending! It was perfect. Thanks soooo much for writing this. I wanna put a bow on it and stick it under my tree and read it christmas morning haha. You're the best! Thanks! I can't wait to read more from you! :D

Bahaha I totally just clicked add to story alert, I guess I want more hahaha!

I absolutely loved this. Every single word was pure genius. Excellent job!

Awwwwwwwwww, this was soooocute and sweet!

Great job!