| Reviews for Angels Like Hourglasses |
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Lunasent chapter 1 . 4/17 I've been binging clips from the remake on YouTube and I so badly want these four to be all lovey-dovey! |
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 lol tifa hissing at saying to her boyfriend and husband cloud i was and will always be your tifa you was just too blinded by our girlfriend aeris s death to see that yes boyfriend of mine i love aeris too |
derek chapter 1 . 6/24/2019 tifa hissing saying to cloud we could have been doing that wheƱ zack and the nutjob came to nibelheim with my love to run and hide shinra soldier if you had just let me know that you was back |
Derek chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 Tifa to cloud i meant what I said i am yours and i will always be yours just as you will always be mine |
derek chapter 1 . 9/28/2018 tifa to my bodyguard take off your mask pants and boxers so that your tour guide can ride your penis |
Mintz chapter 1 . 9/20/2013 At first I was all like, "Awwww :D" And then I was all like, "HOT DAMN :O" But then, at the end, I was all like, "Aaaaawwwwwww! :D" That have me a toothache! ;) |
Chocolatelilac101 chapter 1 . 8/12/2013 Ahhhh this was so sweet and very fluffy! Great one-shot! :D |
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 Even better than your Zack Arieth story, this one went into alot more detail and was an excellent sequel. Wish there was a third but I'm content with these two :D |
Boohbear19 chapter 1 . 6/7/2013 Very good!y favorite part was the ending! :') so sweet! |
Ai Mamoru chapter 1 . 4/19/2013 So there was a sequel. I'm so lucky. And it's even better than "Pink Forget-Me-Nots". I love Zack and Aerith, but I'm a hardcore Cloti-shipper. Let's see if there's a sequel to the sequel ... |
randomteenager chapter 1 . 1/20/2013 You are a lovely writer, your stories deserve much more recognition! This was an adorable sequel to the Zack/Aerith story you wrote. So cute, and I loved the idea of Cloud braiding Aerith's hair. What an adorable an funny mental image. Although I don't support Cloud and Aerith, the way you wrote them in the beginning was good. Aerith's love for Zack was obvious of course, but I liked how Cloud understood why Zack loved her, as she was always full of life and kindness. It almost seemed like were she not dating Zack, Cloud would want to be with her because she could help mend his fragile state. And again, though I don't support the pairing, I like how you wrote that since Aerith did in a sense take Cloud in along with Zack and that's a natural reaction from Cloud. Of course, then he sees Tifa, and all the emotions of loving her come rushing back. Cloud's character here reminded me so much of his Crisis Core character-shy, insecure, quiet, and completely adorable! I love how you retain the idea that both Zack and Cloud are embarrassed about their bodies due to Hojo's experimenting, but the girls overlook the superficial scars and love them anyway. Also I like how you reiterated the "Cloud, who hates human contact" bit. Overall, well done. What a cute story. Great companion piece. Hope you write more in the future! |
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 That was powerful. A powerful couple, coupling powerfully, one might say. Nicely written. |
sunflowerspot chapter 1 . 12/23/2011 Beautiful. i really liked this story. |
Strifegirl chapter 1 . 12/19/2011 This was really sweet and sexy x3 I loved it! :3 |
Marisa chapter 1 . 12/18/2011 This was a very well written, very in-character story. Bold, but demure Tifa; tough but shy Cloud, still recovering from those horrible experiments. I love your description of their eyes. And Zack, you wrote him perfectly. The one thing I could never imagine is Cloud braiding hair...but those secret indulgences are part of his charm. Great story! |