Reviews for A Cunning Plan
Latarra chapter 1 . 4/4
I liked it.
Recreational Potions chapter 1 . 1/24
This was hilarious. And great job making work with only dialogue.

A common issue I see in otherwise good fiction is too much text interrupting the conversation. It's much better when it's snappy and moves as fast as real speech, but authors get bogged down in thoughts and descriptions. I will point to this from now on as an example of how you can tell an effective story with only dialogue that is better than having a paragraph of thoughts for every spoken line.
And FOREVER chapter 1 . 7/6/2019
wonderful!
diamondnightskies chapter 1 . 4/3/2019
This was really funny! I love their back and forth.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2018
Omg I just found this and I love it! I love the back and forth with Hermione and snape it’s perfect
snivellivellus chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
Comedy gold. Not to mention stinkin’ cute.
laelruin chapter 1 . 10/18/2017
Awe! So cute! I totally thought it was Draco at the beginning though.
You Rock!
L
sjrodgers23 chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
sequel please. love it. just ended too soon. Do they get together and marry?thank you
Story Please chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
Awwwwwwwww. This is so cute and lovely. Warmed me right up from my head to my toes. :)
Aesalys chapter 1 . 11/16/2016
Just love it!
Please let me translate it in french
zaubernuss chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Very witty! :) I've never read anything like this! Loved it!
braye27 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Take a bow, Ms LeFey. What a joy this has been. Reading this story was complete and total fun from start to finish!
Beth
Nocturnus chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
I love this!
and the chicken chapter 1 . 6/6/2016
Absolutely lovely!
Nachtwens chapter 1 . 3/23/2016
Nice! :)
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