| Reviews for Quos Amor Verus Tenuit |
|---|
Almariado chapter 20 . 8/20/2016 It's been two years since I've added this story to my favourites and every once in awhile I come back to it. It's very imaginative (the part where Alia explains what should have happened if September hadn't distracted Walternate is brilliant!), very well written and so in character. I can relate to you when you say in your introductory note of the story that you weren't happy with season four and the amber timeline/universe. I remember feeling the same way when I watched season four back when it was aired. I wanted the Blueverse back so much. Your story is a very clever way to bring it back. The introduction of the 'Alia' character and her race opposite the Observers is ingenious and very clever. It fits so well in the story you crafted and explains why Peter ends up in a Universe that it was not his own. The scene where the two Olivia's started bonding in Peter's house while he and Lincoln observed them is priceless. The quantum LED Olivia brought with her to communicate with her Universe was very intelligent of you. And the 'conversations' both Walters had with it were hilarious :) These are only a few motives why I come back to your story every now and then. This review was long due. Better late then never :) Thank you for sharing this amazing story. I've had a great time reading it several times. |
Richiey chapter 20 . 7/23/2012 For all it's abrupt ending, it was a great read. |
roj chapter 20 . 5/25/2012 This was an excellent chapter, and a great way to finish up this story. Thanks so much! |
ceemu chapter 17 . 4/8/2012 More more more I'm totally addicted Ps a double date would be absolutely priceless |
Richiey chapter 16 . 2/23/2012 I am loving this fic, please please post more. |
TheNaggingCube chapter 16 . 2/7/2012 This was outstanding... I liked this chapter alot. I flowed nicely. More soon please. |
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 16 . 2/1/2012 Lovely chapter; I love how you write each of the characters and nail each of their respective voices :) It's also really great to see the contrast between the two Olivias; there's some great character foil moments in that. And Lincoln and Peter, they always seem to have fascinating discussions :) Also, you used lines from a Robert Frost poem :D this makes me most happy :D Great job! CP7 |
Amy chapter 16 . 2/1/2012 both Olivias getting along? Wow! I'm also very angry at them for scaring my Olivia to death! |
CoffinWood chapter 16 . 2/1/2012 Great update! |
Psycho Snicket chapter 15 . 1/31/2012 Simply put, this entire story is wholly stunning. I await each of the chapters of this story with the utmost fervor, and find that I am never disappointed by the beautiful words, portrayals and accuracy of this story. What a wonderfully talented and deep writer you are! I tip my hats to you. Thank you for your time, efforts, and creativity! Psycho Snicket! |
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 15 . 1/28/2012 So relieved to see that Olivia is alright (that was a clever trick too, by the way). And finally, we get some Polivia again :D This chapter was a real kick of surprises; I was so amazed by the revelation of Peter having a son being revealed to him. I had totally forgotten about that until now, and when I read that part I wondered how he would react. I'll admit that I think that he woldn't be as... calm about it I guess as he was here. I feel like when he finds out on the show that will create some more tension. But regardless, it's good to see Peter and Olivia so very close again; I miss them on the show :( Great work! CP7 |
Cerulean.Phoenix7 chapter 12 . 1/28/2012 What? WHAT! OMGOMGOMG NONONONONONO she can't die! The tension in this chapter is insane, and that cliffie OMFG. And now I dare to venture onto the next chapter *gulps* CP7 |
Lionhearted21 chapter 15 . 1/28/2012 This is a lovely story and I can't wait to read more! |
Amy chapter 15 . 1/27/2012 I really hope they can get back to their timeline. I miss walter and astrid too |
roj chapter 15 . 1/25/2012 Very sweet...liked the image of snow falling. Glad she told him about Henry! |