I always found Xander to be incredibly self-righteous and hypocritical about the attack/attempted rape considering he tried to rape Buffy then pretended to not remember. Buffy wasn't much better considering she did the same thing to Spike after he told her to leave when she was invisible and wasn't remotely sorry.

sorry to be this straight forward, but I kind of want to kill you right now after reading that last line.

Angel human again? Seriously? Do you have to do that to Spike? T_T

I mean, I NEVER liked him, seriously, like, never. Well, okay, that's not quite right, but Angel was always so ... I mean, I like the actor, kinda, but I like him better as Booth, less dark and brooding and ... damn it. Why?

Gotta calm myself down somehow ... oh, I liked the fic by the way, though I don't know yet if I'll like the sequel, what with this announcement of Captain Forehead and all ... I'll find out though, I think ...

Goodnight

I liked it a lot, although you kind of left us hanging. What with Angel becoming human and on his way to, Sunnydale. All in all well written, nice character development. A little slow in parts but all in all, WELL DONE! So when does DETOUR come out. Waiting here with baited breath.

i do not like spike, i always thought that he was a monster who did some good thinks. and i thought the buffy was a fool for all the times she let him live when he should have been staked...

that be said i like this story you showed a side of spike that i like about him understanding that he was a monster and hateing it and trying to be a good man. this is the best spike and buffy story that i ever read, and one of only two or 3 that i like...

ps i like what you did with xander you made him not like spike, but did not have buffy throw out of her life... you made he strong and keep her family together and spike was just a part of that family...

great story.

Ah found the sequel on your homepage link :) and i'm up to chapter 12 and weary that every chapter may be the last u've written and i'll be left hanging. You write them all so in character and I'm so annoyed at Willow now because i thought she was getting on with Spike (i don't think the name William suits him anymore, he was William then Spike so now he should be something new Billy, maybe?) and now Poof off to another dimension(?). Why not let Buffy be happy for once? hasn't she lost enough? Spike has suffered, he completed trials and such he should get to treat life saving as a job if he wants...sometimes people (the ones around you) are more important then some world saving mission. Bloody Williow. So yes, I'm enjoying it. Oh and I'm pissed at Angel too (never really like him) for dumping all this in their laps.

Sequel?

Where?

-I like how it doesn't end there and that we get to see Spuffy facing an Angel return...if only it was in your profile...then i could be happy.

oh Clever Spike

'Now the cat was well and truly out of the bag. More than that, the cat was up and dancing, waving flags.' LOL

That is the best expression i've heard in a long time, well done for expanding on an old favorite. I'm really enjoying this (I love Spuffy) and would have just kept reading but those two lines made me stop and forced me to review. I had no say.

Great story. I'd love to read the sequel.

This story was a little disappointing. The writing was great but i didnt like the plot - line. Spike going all with the william and then angel going human? Bit dragged out and too weird. [

"That's much better!" Anya beamed, "And your breasts look magnificent!"

LOL! That is amazingly Anya. Beautiful.

"You're telling me that...Cujo chose...the leash over din-dins?"

"Who told you that? Did he? What else did he tell you? I caught a fish and it was THIS BIG!"

I love how you write Xander...you totally capture the dorky magic that was him on the show. Perfect.

And I enjoy how you label Willow as the "Peace Maker"...that's my perception of her too, mostly.

This was an excellent idea for a fic. Great work.

Loved the story, especially the twist at the end. Did not expect that, but what a great idea.

Eager to read the sequel but can't seem to access your site...

This was a great story for B/S shippers, loved it! *clicks to read sequal*

_ ahhh..wow...finally an amazing buffy fic...its been awhile. and this one was just so scrumptious and juicy...perfect for savoring. im so happy and excited that i had picked out the right fic for a bath...spent 1.5hrs in water and baking soda just reading this. ahh instict hadnt failed me...and then i got out (hey, i was hungry, its mid-day..and stuff...ordered food and contined my enjoyment on the porch and finally ate out there too with the fic still in hand.

the mood and the air of it was exactly how i wanted it...like my semi-fuzzy yellow-orange blanket. and you had the characters down to an art. _. and then the whole clousure section; wow that william/spike is surely something. im still ggrinning from that. well im going back to the porch to digest and read detour..thank you so much.