seriously, John? I mean, seriously?
good job, btw. Interesting characterization and dialogue!

Asdfghjkl that was wonderful!

When Sherlock grabbed his jacket had to be the best part in the piece. That and when John looked through his hair after trying to fix it XD

Ah, it so good! Write more! You MUST!

So sweet! You've done a good job of keeping them all in character I think. Well done!

Wow, Jhon is clueless in this one!
Jajajajaja.
Poor Sherlock...get hit by a car...? The worse for me was an subluxation of my...right feet...hurt like hell!
Can't imagine, get hit by a car...

Beautiful the second time around.

Another excellent story!

very cute story :)

Poor sherlock for getting hurt, especially by a car. And poor John for not getting exactly which doctor mycroft meant but so like him too :)

Great job and once again a very fantastic story by your hands :)

Awwww John is so naïve! () Then again just imagine if he wasn't! (・・) Sherlock's so sweet and cute, holding on to his jacket like that! *:.｡. o()o .｡.:*

Aww, this is really sweet. I love it.

Mags

I really loved this and I think it would be a good continued story, even just one more chapter...please? :P

YAAAAAAAY.

I like! This was great; certainly keep writing things like this! They were both in character (so was Mycroft), and the style of your writing was awesome. A wonderful read, but basically all of your stories are (and your sister's). :'D

Awww, this was really sweet.