Never been prouder to be Italian

Awwwwh this is too sweet. Meaning Santana is the most beautiful girl at least to Brittany. Gimme a sweet girlfriend like this :)

awwwww'ing for days!

Cute!

Lovely. Smart writing. Your good!

AWW. SO PERFECT. :" Love the smartass Brittany. ;)

This is cute!

Awww this is so sweet (: I think my heart melted hahahha

Clever story :-) Really enjoyed it!

Real cute. I always thought Brittany was a smartass. Second-person kinda threw me off though, maybe first- or third-person next time? Keep writing though!

For a first attempt it was good! Personally, I wouldn't use 2nd person as many people find that difficult to read. I also get where you were going with the phrasing and 'complex' wording, but it just seemed a little like you were overcompensating, and it really doesn't ring true for either character. It also made the story a little dry. You can show your own (and the characters') intelligence without taking this route.

I think a little of your own personal head-cannon was going on too, which you really need to explain in the story if you want the reader to understand it. The savant thing just doesn't work without a set up.

freaking amazing! love it!

This just gave me feelings. It actually made me squeal. Perfect.

Educational and sweet. Awesome.

Keep up the good work!