Wish there was more of this pairing!

SO CUTE! That was so adorable...but snake, you need to eat at least another cookie or I will!

Aw! The ending! 'Twas magnificent!

Omg... dear god, I'm blustering with bitter sweet love! God could snake be anymore adorable? He really is just wonderful and you showed that so well. You also wrote Lizzy perfectly it's exactly how she would behave in such a situation. Though she won't admit it I'm sure she would look back on the kiss years latter and perhaps wonder "what if." If you still love this pair please right more!,

Aw so sweet! And in character! I love your characterization of Snake, I could easily imagine this scene happening.
This line was hilarious:

"I hope you succeed...says Goethe,"

sigh

Snake is just so huggable and shy. Lizzie x Snake is probably the most adorable pairing ever conceived.

Well done! *wink* Now I want cookies.

LIZZY CIELS NUTS...MOVE ON! this was really cute. as much as I love to ship ciel and lizzy, I think it will end badly eventually. there's lots of other men in the black butler sea. snakes one of them. super cute fiction!

No man! Eat the freaking cookie! XD
Ahem. This was awesome! I am now into this pairing...

Awe! :3 I never thought of Snake and Lizzie being a couple but it's adorable! (I like fluff) you should do a chapter story with them! I would read the shit out of it :)

Far cuter than any matching petticoat

I declare this story:

EXTREMELY CUTE! :D :D It made me happy.

You write very well. And they're both in-character. :3

Thanks for sharing!