Holy sh#t this is actually really good

that was great keep the chapters coming

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Next is Tsunade. He understood the heartache that Konoha gave the Slug Sannin – (losing both his little brother and his lover to the wars that Konoha participated in but what he saw in the hospital sickened him) this part of the sentence sound weird sorry

hE'S UNIQUE.. AS A WIZARD..able to do stuff they could only dream of.. but if he needs there same way of doing elements (as you said) then he's just a regular nin.. not impressive. AND shouldn't get any extra attention.

Is a wizard? Or isn't he? Because normal nins can do elemental stuff.. and they aren't wizards.. so which is it?

I cursious, why does his powers go from creating anything, to suddenly need taught ninja ways when he doesn't even USE ninja ways?

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The main problems with the "naruto verse" is that it REALLY DOESN'T work with long term "character development"... I mean most of the time the hokage acts like he's either DEEPLY SENILE, or PSYCHOTIC in his decisions. Danzo's whole "lifelong goal to become hokage" doesn't work given his age, how often he's been passed up, and the fact he wouldn't be able to wield even a FRACTION of the power he NOW has from the shadows... If it's attention and adoration he wants then he's as BACKWARDS as a young naturo.. He'll NEVER have that (position or no)... Kakashi;s attitude is a COMPLETE mystery and quite FRANKLY doesn't seem possible OR even logical...Sakura gets better by shippuden but in the beginning, seems too be close to schizophrenic. Sasuke probably shouldn't have ever even been MADE a ninja, the boy needs some REAL time in "institution" to get some help, both with his past and his unwarranted narcissism(you don't give the eqivalant of TNT to the mentally UNSTABLE!) The entire VILLAGE comes off as too dumb to tie their own shoes without guidance. (maybe that's why they all wear sandles?) The show/manga really only lasted BECAUSE OF THE FIGHTS... I mean 95% of the time naruto was NEVER IN THE VILLAGE to begin with (nor was anyone else)! You take the fights out and the series FALLS TO PIECES. (there just isn't enough COHERENT logic too make everything FIT correctly!) Take the academy just as an EXAMPLE. We got a TRAITOR that somehow has been working next to the KIDS of all the clans FOR YEARS somehow, and a teacher that "really wishes he'd helped naruto" Even though he had YEARS to fix his mistakes. The curriculum is CRAP (need a LOT less history a LOT more in basic survival skills) and the kids are all in COMPETITION to be the best, but AS SOON as they graduate they are INSTANTLY expected to work as a team (even though working collectively NEVER appears in the curriculum), plus put together without regard to LATENT power, skills sets or personalities, it's DISASTER! And that's just the academy! One TINY aspect of EVERYTHING that's wrong with the series in comparison... It's GREAT for the fights and the missions, but THAT'S ALL THE SERIES REALLY IS! You take those out (or lessen them) and you have to carve out a NEW konoha (and world) from the GROUND UP! Trying to "cut and paste" your own ideas onto it, just doesn't really work.

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If you don’t mind could you please update.

Alot of things making no sense, how are events still following Canon material when such major changes have happened years before.

Hiruzen is no longer the doormat Hokage
Tsunade and Jiraiya are perm. back in the village.
Civ. council is disbanded and Danzo is on a leash.

Between Hiruzen spy ball and Jiraiya's village spy network, how is the academy STILL sabotaging Naruto's education? EVERYTHING the Hokage and the Sannin have been doing has been for the betterment of the village and Naruto. How could they possible have missed the bias towards him in the academy? How the hell did Naruto fail from only not being able to do the clone technique, he most likely aced EVERYTHING else. How the hell did he believe ANYTHING Mizuki told him? All throughout his acedemy life, Mizuki has been trying to sabotage him and Naruto KNOWS this for a fact. Yet he immediately agrees to steal a scroll from the f**king Hokages office?

You can't just completely change the canon story like such and then try to implement canon storyline and expect it to just make sense when alot of the main characters are OOC.

"If one didn't know Naruto, he could easily pass himself off as a teenager and nobody would ever know"

He is already 13, so he is a teenager.

Keep up with the awesome work!
Really love this story.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up with the awesome story!

so much for this getting done