I know I’m 8 years late but this was amazing possibly the best fanfic I’ve read I felt so much emotion reading this and I loved every moment of it

This was amazing.

If there love was already fix why did Aphrodite give Artemis the pouch was it for a future event for the children or something else in the future great story story and I hope you made a sequel to this story.

Well that stink they had to give up there love for each other to save the world and the balance what will next chapter be like?

The fates are after eterna's life why?does he threaten the fates power? Good they need a kick in the ass for all the lives they torment if they cared for the ones they Hurt or not but I hope when this is over if the fates live they learn to be more kind and less vindictive to those who change their fate great chapter.

Well Artemis is starting to loosen up on her rule if hunters don't fall in love And the other hunters have warm up to the idea of those two together. I hope old bolt ️ boy Zeus doesn't take offense of Thalia falling in love with hades grandchild. next chapter will be fun too read.

This will be a messy time I wonder who eterna will Wind up with if we choose one of the hunters if he choose to break his vow.

Eternal is becoming more closer to his fellow hunters by sleeping in a tent next to there's so long as they don't sleep nude that is heehaa eterna is a very shy boy but a respectful boy to girls.I wonder why hades was so quiet when they were talking about eterna does hades know something about his grandson's future that no one else nows? Sweet cliffhangers to this chapter.

Already the first male hunter of Artemis and son of nico and calypso and now he has a great prophecy in his name will happen next in this great chapter.

Nico and calypso are a couple and had a son did not see that coming what will hades say now he is a grandfather and why did calypso leave her child alone in the woods with animals. Sweet chapter

Artemis' first male hunter I wonder what apollo and Zeus will say about this or what Aphrodite would do to him great story.

I usually wouldn't like something like this, but you've won me over. Good job with this! :)

A great story line, BUT the terrible spelling and drammer is too much torture for me to take - i will not read any more of this fic

wow! any sequel?

cool story!