This was honestly so amazing! Really wish they would have done something like this in the show!

awesome!

This would have made a great episode!

Very moving-very touching! Great story!

great story.. i love the friendship between danno and steve..

What a great take on this episode and scene! I can see how this very easily dove-tails into what we saw on TV.

I really like Joe, and I hope he comes back for season 3. Even if Steve and Danny need to whip his ass...

What a fabulous, dark turn of events for Joe! Brilliantly crafted and entirely plausible - just twisted enough to be unexpected but not outrageous. Think you could teach the writers at 5-0 a few things about plot development! Thanks for crafting!

Wow. That was quite the turn of events! I like Joe but I like what you did here. Okay, so I'm partial because of the content (that Steve H/C thing), but seriously, I really like it. :)

Yeah.

That's it.

The Danny rant lets Steve know that everything will be all right.

There's more to Shelburne than we know.

You've written a most interesting coda/tag to the episode.

Wow, what a story! All along I've felt that Joe wasn't to be trusted, no matter what his reason might be. It will be interesting to see what will happen once the next episode airs.

As to your story - it was amazing! ARGH - this is so frustrating for me. I can't find the words I want to express how impressed I was with your work. So, I guess I'll just have to say thank you and let it go at that...

You know, I had the same bad feeling when Joe said that phrase. I was really expecting something to happen and was very disappointed when the show just ended there.

I'm so glad you decided to take things beyond the black screen. I could see something like this happening - I've been getting a more and more dangerous vibe from Joe's character over the last few episodes. So, yes, terrific job and very plausible (in my humble opinion)!

Joe's voice did sound a little ominous at the end of that ep didn't it... So glad you decided to go ahead and write something based on that! Loved how you described Steve and Danny's friendship and great job overall on the story!

I loved this story. I thought it was so well-written, and it makes me wish that the actual writers of the show had the guts to include a twist like this. Great idea, and great delivery!

wow wow and again wow! this is a mastership! you are brilliant!i want you to know that i gave the link to this ff to the executive producer of the show! told him he mest read it! thank you so much for this!

Wahh I loved this! And I was *so* sure something was about to happen in that last scene in the episode, I swear my heart was beating a little faster lol. Thanks for writing this! Great job :D