this is beautiful and romantic, erotic almost lyrical.
well done.

*shivers* Oh, oh oh oh. So beautiful and romantic. I loved it very much. Nice look into both of them!

This is so fluffy yet hot. The fangirl in me squeals.

CUTE!

That was dark and rich and a little bit beautiful. A very captivating read, good job!

That was a beautiful o/s. Very tender and sensual for a bruising prompt.

I really enjoyed your use of senses in this story - the sounds, the touches, they were so visceral to me, I feel like I *felt* the story, more than read it. Loved it.

Beautifully written.

I want to cry; this was so lovely.

Beautifully written. I'm just amazed. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Wow! Beautiful bb, pure poetry. I loved it :)

Great job with the prompt. It was a really good read. Thanks for writing and sharing.

That was stunning - a high wire act of sensation and imagery. I had only lusty babbling to offer after finishing...trying to collect my scattered thoughts. I love the way it unfolds with flashbacks and this aching sex scene interwoven with the backstory. I love the connection between them, the way it's written on Mike's skin. Squirmy hot reading. Gorgeous. Breathtaking. What else can I say. Wow. xx

Oh wowie, this was fantastic! I tend to not have as much interest in some of the minor characters, but Demetri and Mike are two exceptions and that you paired them together, vampire and human? Totally my kink.

Dreamy, sensuous and so sexy. I love how you interpreted the prompt. And your Demetri was completely swoony - passionate, protective, tender. I've read a couple of your vamp slash pieces and adored them. I'm going to have to check out the ones I've missed.

Oh! And I also love that Marcus is a secret sympathizer.

Gorgeous. One of my faves of the fest so far.

xoxo

WOW. This is absolutely amazing! I love what you did with the prompt, and the pairing you chose. The story was so sensual and gentle in a way, while also being raw and visceral. Your words read like poetry and the imagery was fantastic. This is so much more than I hoped for when I posted the prompt. Thank you so much filling this bb! xoxo

Holy hell. This was GORGEOUS. Not my usual pairing, but the history, the sensuality, the play of Dmitri's lips over his skin, the marking. Everything. Absolutely beautiful language. Sexy and yet so much more than a lemon. I absolutely adored it.