Reviews for Oblivious no more
themattman4000 chapter 1 . 3/1
Go fuck yourselves ps your story suck
foxchick1 chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
Curious to see what happens next.
kena86 chapter 1 . 7/6/2019
uuu... reiniciaste?
Seventh Doctor chapter 1 . 6/24/2019
I think the story's glitched for me. I can only see the first chapter, yet i'm seeing people reviewing on other chapters.
zlap chapter 2 . 6/22/2019
'Spread-eagled'?! Genuinely the worst descriptor you ccould have picked.
creativesm75 chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
interesting
verifiaman chapter 11 . 10/29/2013
oh wow ive been waiting for this one! bene a while!
catspats31 chapter 10 . 7/22/2013
This part of the story is well worth the wait. The writing quality is good and the plot is interesting. I'd say your story is a good alternate universe story just like "How on Earth?". Please continue writing because I can't wait to see what happens next.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator
i-didnt-lose-sammys-shoe chapter 5 . 1/11/2012
Your story is very interesting. I like it.
Too Lazy to Login9 chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This story is an amazing take on that episode!
KNDnumber170 chapter 3 . 12/16/2011
Spooky and sad, nice, I really like this story.
souhoku chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
Well, this is interesting.

I suggest you add a new line whenever a new person talks though:

"Speak of the devil.

"Nigel? How are you feeling?" ... He called the police? All right, I'll meet you at your house right away. "

"No! I need you to stay at home, Abby. Tell your parents the truth about the KND. And call the others; tell them the same thing. Got it?"

"Fine. But Nigel, be careful."

It's rather difficult to read when each quotation is on one line.

Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter.