Hello, i've been rereading this story for about the third time and i'm finally brave enough to leave a comment. I really love this story. The interactions between Rinoa and Squall are so cute and sweet. They always made me smile while reading. Also, Z. S. I and Quistis are so funny! I love how their friendship is portrayed here.
Thank you for writing this. It makes me happy :D

cute

Hey very nice story and very very romantic. I really enjoyed Squall and Rinoa's time together though short it's incredibly sweet and touching.

Martine is a bastard though! Just a quick question, why did you let this story die? I hope that this does not lay forgotten and that you have not been too busy but the last update date speaks for itself. Hope you come back soon.

Cheers

Keep Writing

Dangit, I wish you hadn't stopped writing. Oh well.

Very good story! I like the fact that it's not as angsty as the other Squinoa fanfics I find lying around here, and that Squall is actually a pretty cool character and isn't too formal or too involved in his role as Commander.

Please keep up the good work! Oh, and that scene with Irvine talking in the mic about periods and S-E- and all that was priceless xD

Hey, have really enjoyed reading your story! Many years ago I used to be addicted to FFVI fanfiction and after a long sabbatical I've returned and realised all I've been missing out on in that time thanks to people like Ashbear and yourself! I love the characterisation and how well written everyone is in comparison to their on-game persona. Each of them, especially Squall and Rinoa, seem to be progressing very natural as if straight from game to epilogue. Can't wait to read more!

Okay, where's the update 8 ? Dude, this was getting soo...(years later)...o good! And then I'm left at a freaking cliff-hanger? TT_TT *sob*

But really, it's good. The quality is OBVIOUSLY above average, and I'm glad to say I've only seen, like one or two typos. Please update. My whole life on the net is anchored by FFVI fanfics, and if this continues...it's gonna get anchored by waiting and cliffhangers...and waiting...and more horrifying cliffhangers. So yeah...please, please, please update because I am SO diggin' this story

Plealse contact at said email when next chapter is posted. Thank you! LOved you story, exactly like, well them.

Plez wright more i really enjoyed reading!

i love Z.S.I! and my favourite excuse was the zombies!

not sure what to say really! high quality as always, and a great blend of humour and romance.

fantastic

Wow, I haven't seen you in a long time! It's like we're coming out of the woodwork. I just added something new too recently.

so will Squall really care about this competition? Does he really want to be Commander of all the gardens anyway? Is it hiding under his desk now? What are those 3 up to?

Oh my, this was a wonderful chap! This one had me laughing and cracking up at the group's antics, and their little comments every minute! Man, you're so good with the humor.

I loved Squall and Rinoa's moment at the end, it was so heartfelt and just adorable. I look forward to those every chapter.

I'm glad you worked out a conclusion, cuz I'm anxious once again for more chaps!

Wow I loved the FF X2 bit, it had me in hysterics, especially Zell (it WOULD be cool to say that!)

Great characterization and high quality as always! I really hope you are still writing. I think that was your best chapter yet. It wasn't too short, it worked perfectly, the right blend of humour and depth.

Actually, I think I may have learned something from you- not to rush my story so much! I have a tendancy to push forward before it's ready to make sure people don't lose interest. However, even if the reader has to wait, it's much better to deliver something of this quality with a longer wait than a lower quality quicker delivery. I'm sure people (myself included) will wait for your writing.

eh-hem, sorry for rambling! I hope some of that was helpful in some way!

Blimey what a day! Poor old Squall. well, at least it ended well!

(circles hand in front of elsie's face rinoa stylee) "look into my eyes... you will be motivated... you will be motivated!" lol did it work?