Reviews for The New Generation
OnceUponABrokenRegal chapter 3 . 4/19/2012
I can change mine to Minerva roman(athena) if you want to
OnceUponABrokenRegal chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
you forgot mine olivia jhonson hesias daughter :(
KA chapter 5 . 1/4/2012
Name: Kenneth Hawke

Nickname(s): Kenny, Ken, Sparky

Gender: male

Birthday: January 21

Age: 15

Roman

Godly parent: Jupiter

Normal family: uncle, aunt(his mom sister),his two cousins(last names is Allen/you decide their named/one cousin his the same age as him and the other is eleven years old)

Physical Appearance: He has black hair and electric blue eyes. He looks like his dad. He is athletic and muscular build. He is tan and attractive.

Personality: He is a natural born leader but he is shy when it comes to the spotlight so he let Nate lend. He has doubt and criticizes himself when he makes an error. He is a bit clumsy, less confident, down to earth, and a bit short tempered. Despite, this he is a strong person as well as a strong fighter that equal to Mira and any fighter. He has a sense of humor and knows how to have fun. He has a strong sense of justice and honor. He is courageous, honest, stubborn, caring, kindhearted, determined, respectful, & reliable. He will risk his life to protect the ones he cares about. Some of his personality will change over time. He is a quick thinker and well manner.

Fatal flaw: Loyalty

Bio: His mom died when he was ten(you can decide how she died).He live in New York with his relatives in an apartment. He was claimed when he was thirteen. You can decide the rest.

Year-rounder or summer camper

Weapon of choice: imperial gold long sword and an imperial gold shield which is disguise as a wrist watch

Talents useful in battle: quick reflexes, amazing fighting skills, knows how to use the field to his advantage

Talents in general: he can skateboard, he can play soccer

Others: He is Mira’s love interest and a friend of Nate. His powers are electrokinesis(which as makes him resistance to lightning or electricity),and atmokinesis, aerokinesis(which can help him fly).He has a white Pegasus named Sky.

Cohort: second cohort
DaughterOfArtemis2212 chapter 5 . 1/1/2012
Name: Catalina Charlotte Wilfred

Nickname(s): Cat

Gender: F

Birthday: August 8 2035

Age: 13

Greek or Roman: Roman

Cohort: Centurion of the 5th Cohort

Godly parent: Minerva

Normal family: Charles Wilfred

Physical Appearance: She has honey blonde curly hair. She has blue eyes with grey tints. She has no visible muscles, and she is about 5'6.5. She is fit and wears her hair in a high ponytail. Her helmet is custom made so that there is a hole for her ponytail.

Personality: She is fierce, brave, strong, wise and is a good leader. She was a camp for a long time before becoming centurion. But she feels like if she does something wrong her cohort will hate her.

Fatal flaw: Ambition

Bio (story of life before this story started): She was raised by her single father until she was about 5, when he got remarried her step-mother, who brought in 2 more kids. The 2 kids were her age and she expected them to be friends. But she was far off. Her step-mother and her family hated her and was so mean to her. She could only stand 6 months there before her 6th birthday. Before she left her father gave her a 35cm long dagger who was named 'NEOPTOLEMUS.' She ran and made it out alive from many attacks with the skill of her mother. She was finally found by Lupa's pack. She was raised and sent off the camp when she was 6 1/2. She rised until she was the youngest Centurion at camp at the age of 12. Has been for a year now.

Year-rounder or summer camper: Year-rounder

Weapon of choice: Her dagger

Talents useful in battle: She can't think of a battle and not doing anything and she is amazingly experienced after 9 years at camp.

Talents in general (eg. very musical, an excellent artist): She can't really do anything else except for battle except for playing the flute

Others (include things like romantic interest or types of people that he/she likes and other sort of things):

You can decide about her romance, she is the Centurion of the Fifth Cohort
Rex123 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Name: Archie Jones

Nickname: AJ

Gender: male

Birthday: March 17th

Age: you can decide

Greek

Godly Parent: Ares

Normal family: uncle(you can decide his uncle name)

Physical Appearance: He has spike red hair and amber eyes. He is very muscular, tall, and big. He more of a street punk with a black leather jacket, black jeans, black combat boots, and black sunglasses. He is described as handsome with scarred cheeks.

Personality: He is proud, courageous, strong, arrogance, rebellious, stubborn, headstrong, & short tempered. He is a bully who only cares about fighting. He hates being call a coward and is willing to pick fights with people for no apparent reasons. He believes any problems can be solved by through fighting. Despite, his personality he has a soft spot for his siblings, animals, & cute girls. He never shows his kind, sweets, generous, and caring side unless it is the girl he likes. He prefers to fight his own battles than have someone fight for him. He has a strong sense of duty and is very loyal. He has respect for those who can stand up to him or beat him in a fight.

Fatal flaw: you can decide

Bio: He was born in Kansas. His mom died when he was ten and he went to live with his uncle in Canada. You can do the rest.

Year rounder or summer camper

Weapon of choice: a celestial bronze two hand board sword, an electric spear(for backup), and a hunting knife

Talents useful in battle: high strength swiftness & combat skills, expert in all weapons usages, expertise in war strategy, ability to curse opponents’ weapons

Talents in general: you can decide

Others: He enjoys eating a lot of food, training, and fighting. He like metal, hard rocks & other music like that. He dislikes cowards and weaklings. He likes motorcycles, monster trucks, and wresting.

Ryan is first cohort and Rebecca is second cohort. Ryan has dark brown eyes that almost seems black.
The Ficsmith chapter 3 . 12/29/2011
Name:Ariella Frizell

Nicknames:Ari, Ella and Lucky

Gender:Girl

Birthday:October 31

Age:14

Greek or Roman:Roman

4th Cohort

Godly parent:Fortuna

Normal family:Maxwell Frizell, dad, Emily Frizell, step-mom and Lizzie Frizell, step-sister

Physical Appearance:She has bright, curly red hair, freckles and chocolate brown eyes.

Personality:She is a bit arrogant because things usually go her way, but she really cares about the people around her and will give some of her luck to someone who's having a bad day. She will never give up once she's started something because she believes she can do anything, and won't accept help.

Fatal flaw:Hubris

Bio: Ari comes from about the best family a demigod could ask for. She has a great dad, a good step-mom and a nice step-sister. She didn't come to camp until she was 12.

Year-rounder or summer camper:Summer Camper

Weapon of choice:An imperial dagger.

Talents useful in battle:She's very lucky, so if you are not a much better fighter than she is, she can almost always defeat you.

Talents in general: She is good at painting, video games, monopoly, and most anything that has an element of luck.

Others: I don't really care if she has a romantic intrest. If you have someone you think will work with her thats great, though.
The Ficsmith chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
Thanks so much for accepting Aubrey! And on romantic intrests for Aubrey and Ron I can see them together because they could play off of each others strenghts and weaknesses.
The Ficsmith chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Name:Ronald Kelly

Nickname:Ron

Gender:Male

Birthday:December 11

Age:16

Greek or Roman:Roman

Godly parent:Venus

Cohort: 5th

Normal family:Steve Kelly, dad

Physical Appearance:He has emerald eyes, an olive skin tone and dark brown hair. He is of average height and build.

Personality:He feels inferior and insecure being the son of the goddess of love, but appears arrogant on the outside because he refuses to let anyone know. He will stick up for what he believes in and is a good friend because he will encourage you and bring out your best.

Fatal flaw:Feelings of Inferiority

Bio: Ron's dad is a painter and Venus feel in love with him in his senior year of college. He was ill-equipped to take care of a child, but he managed ok until Ron went with Lupa at age 9.

Year-rounder or summer camper:Year rounder

Weapon of choice: He uses an Imperial gold gladius.

Talents useful in battle: Due to being a son of Venus, the girls he fights are usually attracted to him, this can make it easier or harder to defeat them, depending on the girl.

Talents in general:He is good at drawing, understands other peoples emotions and handles his own well, he would make a good Psychologist.

Others:He hates people who think they're better than everyone else, violence, and is afraid of getting shots. He loves his friends, doves, and helping people with their feelings.
wannnabeMellark-hadtobejones chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Name: Damien Morf

Nickname(s):

Gender: male

Birthday: september 23

Age: 15

Greek or Roman: greek

Godly parent: Apollo

Normal family: Nikki Morf(Mom) David Morf(step brother 14) Daniel morf(step dad)

Physical Appearance: has brown hair brown eyes is 5’8 is build has a good tan and has a great smile

Personality: Nice funny outgoing speaks his mind(but sometimes that gets him into trouble) good at sports

Fatal flaw: sometimes he can be very stubborn

Bio (story of life before this story started):his mom remarried when he was 5 they have been moving around a lot because there house always gets attacked so when he was 12 his mom took him to camp.

Year-rounder or summer camper: year round

Weapon of choice: bow and arrow

Talents useful in battle: bow and arrow never misses as shot

Talents in general (eg. very musical, an excellent artist): good at guitar good at football

Others (include things like romantic interest or types of people that he/she likes and other sort of things): I know you have a lot of Apollo campers but you could change him to Hermes I read over the submittion for lexi Harrison and I am willing to make Damien Lexi’s boyfriend .PM for any question
Emzeekay chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Hey, Addie's gonna end up with Nick right? If yes, make addie a bit hesitant at first, because she actually cares about him and doesnt want their friendship ruined. but after a while she decides to go with it. It should last throughout your story i guess.

And dont make her lovey-dovey like aphrodite's kids :P

Thanks,

Emzeekay
MusicPlayer chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Hey thanks for accepting my two characters Jake (JD) and Danni. I forgot to write about Danni's other nickname which is MA, it stands for My Angel something her father used to call her when she was little, her brother also calls her this because she accepted I'm when no one else would. One day Jake heard her little brother call her this and decided to call her that too because she got him to open up to the world just a little bit more everyday

Also I'm not sure if I'm supposed to put down what they normally like to wear so I'll just do that now; Jacob tends to wear either his Camp Half-Blood shirt or his red/blue muscle shirt with a pair of dark jeans ,white vans, he sometimes wear a black fitted hat that Danni got him for his birthday that says "JD" on it in white with a blue lightning bolt going through it(but JD is still visible) and he normally spikes his hair up in the front.

Now for Danni, she is usually seen in either her Camp Hlaf-Blood shirt, a tang top with a black hoodie over it, or her red and blue flannel and a pair of whit shorts or just regular jeans. Like her best friend she has a gray fitted hat that says "MA" on it with angels on both sides, she also sports black van with neon pink and green laces( can't forget those )
83567893564355788 chapter 5 . 12/27/2011
Well, I have one more OC left and, conveniently, he's a son of Apollo (albeit Greek, but I'll change him to Roman.) Oh, and thanks for accepting Dria.

Name: Ian Hardwicke II

Nickname(s): N/A

Gender: male

Birthday: February 25

Age: 15

Greek or Roman: Roman

Godly parent: Apollo

Normal family: Pauline Hardwicke (mother)

Physical Appearance: He's kind of pale and muscular. He stands at 5'10" and weighs around 120 lbs. His hair is dark brown and shaggy, slightly covering his dark blue eyes. Ian sometimes keeps his hair in a low ponytail. He wears a red flannel shirt with a navy sweatervest over it. With that, he wears dark blue jeans and black sneakers.

Personality: Ian is a very quiet and serious guy. He doesn't like people who can't be serious and has a habit of staying up until the early hours of the morning. Ian loves to read and is very intelligent. Archery is something he is quite interested in, along with art. Painting is a great hobby of his and others will constantly find him doing so during his free time. It's not very hard to get him angry; you just have to be loud around him. Ian is highly ambitious and sets very high standards for himself, though he gets frustrated if he doesn't live up to those standards. He's a big fan of sports and is very athletic. He dreams of being a doctor like his mother one day because he enjoys helping people. Being an aural learner, Ian is slow in learning in any other way. Ian's a bit spoiled because of his rich upbringing, but he prefers to do things himself and is independent. Ian is pretty socially awkward and is even more awkward around girls. However, if someone took the time to befriend him, he'd be much less cold and aloof.

Fatal flaw: He is sometimes overly confident and thinks he knows everything. Also, henhas trust issues and anxiety.

Bio (story of life before this story started): Ian was raised by his mother Pauline in a rich upbringing. He comes from a large family of doctors of all kinds. Ian was the perfect child when he was little. He was quiet, respectful, and smart. Because of this, he was constantly doted on and praised for his work. From the time when he was little, he was enrolled in boarding school. Unlike most demigods, he excelled in school and did not have dyslexia. However, he did have ADHD and caused trouble occasionally in school. When he was eight, he caused an incident by speaking in perfect Latin to a substitute teacher who turned out to be a Cyclops. Before it could attack, all of the students rushed into the hallway along with a bunch of teachers. The Cyclops did not want to cause a scene with all of these people, so he bided his time. Unfortunately, he waited too long and the teacher came back. However, the Cyclops eventually came back and attempted to abduct Ian, but one of the teachers turned out to be a satyr looking for Greek demigods. The satyr vaporized the Cyclops and gave Ian a head start on finding Camp, for he had to venture on his own. Pauline refused to let him venture alone at that age, so he was forced to stay in school. Ian grew apprehensive as the years went by, until he was fourteen. That was the age his mother let him go, dropping him off at the same spot the satyr showed him six years prior. He ventured to Camp by his lonesome, living on the food and money Pauline left him. It took him a couple of weeks before he finally found Camp, but at the very least, he survived.

Year-rounder or summer camper: summer camper

Weapon of choice: Imperial gold bow and arrows

Talents useful in battle: He has excellent aim and is a great strategist. Ian's also fast and muscular with quick reflexes. His shots are very accurate and precise, being a son of Apollo. He can also heal people if he calls down a blessing of Apollo, as with most of his children.

Talents in general (eg. very musical, an excellent artist): Ian is quite the singer and loves painting. He's also extremely intellectual and has a knack for the poetry (unlike his father cough cough)

Others

Romantic interest: I was thinking of making him have unrequited feelings for Dria, but that's up to you.

People with whom he'd get along: Ian likes quiet people who are smart and serious. He hates loud people and people he feels are not as intellectually inclined as he is. Also, he'd get along with people who also have a love for the arts.

Oh yeah: he can be the centurion of the Second Cohort if you don't have one already.
Rex123 chapter 5 . 12/27/2011
You can change Alison named to Bridget or Rebecca. You can decide which Cohorts my characters belong to.
Shy Rebel chapter 5 . 12/27/2011
Name: Alain Wicks

Nickname(s): just Alain

Gender: male

Birthday: April 7th

Age: 15

Greek or Roman: Roman!

Godly parent: Mercury, messenger of the gods, the roman version of hermes

Normal family: His mother is very rough on him. He fails his classes, he seems to be bad at everything, the only thing he seems to be any good at is drawing, and his drawings aren't exactly rainbows and butterflies but dark and depressing. The disapproval wore him down a bit and they always butted heads.

Physical Appearance: He wears jeans, a hoodie, skater boy shoes, sort of the skater boy appearance without the hat or baggy jeans. He is between tan and pale, it depends on the season. He has sandy brown hair that is sort of justin bieberish and blue-grey eyes. He is rather handsome, with a sort of rebel air and always walking with his hands in his pockets Alain is short for his age, but he will grow when he gets taller, built like a runner.

Personality: He butts heads with everyone. Alain causes trouble, never does a thing without causing trouble, and can't seem to go through a day without someone asking what's wrong with him. He is frustrated, mad, and no one is helping to guide him. He does all these bad things because he is just so lost. If you go up to him or try to comfort him, he'll tell you to leave him alone. Alain hates sympathy, and is too stubborn to accept pity. The guy is serious all the time, and not much fun to hang out with for now. you'll always see him sketching drawings in his beat up note pad all the time, and he guards it heavily so his siblings won't steal it. Alain always acts like he's too cool to do things or follow the rules and is very moody. Some of the things he pretends he would never do, he actually likes. For example, he'll never sing camp songs at camp fire, but he'll hum them by himself. Now, I know he's seeming like a son of Hades, but if someone can open him up a bit, he actually smiles, he can be sweet, cracks a sarcastic joke or two, and very clever. The guy is very bad with girls.

Fatal flaw: He always refuses help

Bio (story of life before this story started): Fighting with his mom. Being suspended. Being sent home for moodiness. Just nothing was right. Things could of been worse, but he was depressed, sullen. As soon as he was claimed, his mom literally kicked him out. He's not getting over it, he can't by himself.

Year-rounder or summer camper: year-rounder

Weapon of choice: a sleek silver sword the same color of the gray in his eyes

Talents useful in battle: quick, comes out of no where, not afraid to try risky plans

Talents in general (eg. very musical, an excellent artist): drawing rather gothic portraits with a pencil or spray paint

Others (include things like romantic interest or types of people that he/she likes and other sort of things): could his romantic interests be with either the unique talkative girl, or the shy girl? The one that isn't popular, like a farm girl or something? He likes people that see him as an equal and don't pity him, along with being more positive than himself.
The Optimal Oz chapter 5 . 12/27/2011
Name:Darrell Porters

Nickname(s):none

Gender:male

Birthday:January 2

Age:16

Greek or Roman:Roman

Godly parent:Apollo

Normal family:His mom is Diane Porters.

Physical Appearance:He is 6'2 and has an athletic has very tan skin and light blond eyes are a blue like the sky and he tends to smile alot.

Personality:He is very different compared to other roman is usally relaxed and is very is not as brutal as other romans and tends to be nice and talks and cracks jokes alot .He would wrather talk things out than fight but he will fight in a moments notice if he has to.

Fatal flaw:His layed back behavior.

Bio (story of life before this story started):He went to Lupa at age was very tough training with Lupa but he finished and went to at first was beat up easily for trying to out muscle his opponents but he soon relized the other romans were not as creative as him when it came to battle and he used that to his began to start whening fights and he became a skilled battle plans are considered crazy but they usually is well liked among the other campers and was voted to become a praetor.

Year-rounder or summer camper:Year rounder

Weapon of choice:He has his bow and arrows and he keeps a knife.

Talents useful in battle:He is an amazing archer and is very unpredictable.

Talents in general (eg. very musical, an excellent artist):He plays the guitar.

Others (include things like romantic interest or types of people that he/she likes and other sort of things):He

likes a girl that can be layed back and sweet.
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