Love it. I was looking for something like this fanfic, because Rory needs an analysis without emotions and focusing on the facts and the things everyone thinks but no one says.
Thanks for sharing :)

I really liked this. You did a great job of getting in Rory's head and I loved your little side notes in the parentheses. Bravo!

enjoyed it

guessing luke and lorelei's wedding

Reviewer says more! I loved this - for once a fanfiction where you didn't twist any of the events, and make up something that didn't happen - you used the real events, Rory's real personality, and made a conclusion that fits and is actually very plausible. I would love to read more of this story, though it was a beautiful conclusion.

Another great one shot! Loved it. Please continue writing...I can't wait to read more of your work!

Another great foray into Rory's mind. Really wonderful, made even better for me because I have trouble getting in Rory's head (where I feel the complexities of Jess' are easier for me to decipher...go figure). At any rate, this is probably because I don't understand why the hell she took Logan back. If her emotions weren't such a mess, it definitely would have been Jess at Truncheon like all us Literati fans wanted. But this pretty much sums up what would have been going through her head, and from the 'he broke my heart' perspective in addition to Rory's observations concerning Lorelai/Chris, I can totally understand. But let's not deny that Rory/Jess are perfection in their flaws. Loved the ending, especially how they kept in contact. Such a brief mention in the analysis of it all that brought a sense of continued possibilities. I'm nudging Rory to make her move during the wedding. Girl needs to stop messing with poor Jess' head. He's only been waiting forever. :)

see I agree but I have another pace of physiology to add each of her boyfriends had a piece of Christopher to them. Dean looked like him jess acted like him and Logan acted like him and had his money.

I think this is definitely what went through Rory's mind. I hunk you're spot in. I loved the ending also.. :)

Once again, the mind of Rory Gilmore explained in a near-perfect fashion.

I find it ironic, that determination (which is something I recognized, too) of her not wanting to have a Christopher, of being afraid that Jess was her Christopher, when the person most LIKE Christopher was... well, Logan. Oh, bitter irony!