Heh, read over chapter 10 twice! (In other words, I like it!)

Such an awesome chapter to this series! The song fit perfectly with your writing and the dialogue was well placed. Overall, this story was well written, as usual, perfectly timed (it didn't drag on- no kidnapping readers), and you could understand the perspectives of the couple piecing back together their lives and hearts! Bravo!

Ahh...I love all the angusty exchange between these two. And the endingBTW when are you planning to update your other pocahontas stories? I have been waiting eagerly.

PS: Thanks for your review for my Aladdin fic. I have updated too

Aw, this was very sweet and perfect for the holidays.

I loved the entire exchange between them and how she threw her gloves into the fireplace as they were leaving together. Nice imagery.

Great addition to your 12 days and I hope you’ll
Add the other two as well!

Once again a really well written chapter.

I enjoyed the suspense between Thomas and Nakoma and the chemistry between them.

Great plot, you almost made me feel sorry for him- note I said almost. It's ironic, but I read this chapter while listening to Drunk on Love by Rhianna and it made this chapter even more powerful and thus I felt for JR a bit. Perhaps you could write a chapter where JR finds another "love" after Christmas in a "New Year" (This would work considering he married a 3rd time and had a daughter after the real Pocahontas' death).

I am in the process of moving, so sorry this is late. This chapter was hot, nothing like Christmas smexyness. This was so cute and passionate. I can't wait for the rest, perhaps you could keep this going until New Year's.

I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I loved the chemistry and passion between John and Pochantas. I can;y wait to read more. :)

This was such a cute chapter :)

This was such a good chapter.

I can't believe that it is the half point already I enjoyed reading ever single one of the chapters.

Omg, I'm in love with that last line. Perfection.

You like these little family scenes, don't you? I know I do. I love the comparision between JOhn as a child and his interactions with his children in the second part. So fliipin' sweet.

Keep up the good work, woman!

Awww...i love family fics.

This was so sweet and I loved when they asked if kisses were presents. So sweet and cute! Awesome job :)

This was such a cute chapter I enjoyed reading it so much

I love reading this fanfiction the storylines are so adorable. I like how you don't always make it in the christmas season but just in the winter setting becasue somehow it makes me like reflect on the magic of christamas. These is a perfect fanfiction for the christamas season.

D'awwwwwwwwww the adorable-ness

This was so cute...and a great distraction from my torts final. Keep going! :)