| Reviews for Primal |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2018 ooooooooohhhhhhhh shhiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttt |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2018 WOW! |
ROBOTRASH chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 HOLY FUCK I AM FUKCING EWEAK |
Diving in chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 ...Holy shit! ! ! *fan herself quickly* That was intense. |
TheCauldron chapter 1 . 7/17/2016 Good god that was hot! |
Transfan chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 Holy Pit! That was just... WOW 11/10! |
theSapphireSister chapter 1 . 3/26/2016 This was AMAZING! You write so beautifully (not only with this story but all the others as well)! I actually want more; you have no idea how hot this was to read! Please continue. |
Blossom chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 Oh my goodness I am in the middle of reading your story Primary Mechanism and I have to say I absolutely love love love love your story. it is a phenomenal story. at first when I saw I had 118 chapters I was thinking "oh this is going to be one of those drag out stories" but no it really Isnt not even a little and it's a really good story please keep up the good work I look forward to reading more of your work. P.S.- when I read that you were the same author that wrote Primary Mechanisms I burst out laughing since I just finished chapter 56 in it. |
JennyJill chapter 1 . 12/24/2015 .God. Need. Cold. Shower. Now! |
This Is The End's Beginning chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 This was amazing. Seriously, many don't like this kind of writing because of the metal/flesh part, but I loved it. Keep writing because what you're doing here is perfect. I can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you! |
renegademechanic chapter 1 . 5/31/2015 This was cool. I'll be honest I read this curious if I would enjoy tf smut, I've never read any before (I'm like 15 chapters into Primary Mechanisms though)... and I wanted to say, awesome! Feels very in character and I liked all the details of how it would work for a Cybertronian. If it came to it, this is how I would believe the scene would play out. While if I'm completely honest, I'm not attracted to the Autobots (okay, save for the Peterbilt, but that has a lot to do with me being attracted to the actual truck-minus Prime-in the first place. Raging mechasexual, oops. And that scene in PM where he lets her drive and she goes to shift... *whistles* that's what I'm talkin' about, mhmmm, flustered hot trucks), I did find this pretty hot regardless! As I always say, there's always room for more mechanical lovins in this world. The people you referenced in your warning note are crazy. Or maybe I am. Regardless-well done! |
bla bla bla chapter 1 . 2/19/2015 Aww the end is cute |
Blue Phoenix Shinju chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 This is one hot story. Shin |
theLadyCheshire chapter 1 . 7/22/2014 some of the best citrus i've read here on ff. well done. |
C. S. Stars chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 Sweet holy mother of god. That was intense and amazing! |