Last time I checked shadow is 50 not 21

Shadow is over 50 not 21

Congratulations, you just join the club of authors that turned Rouge into a FREAKING MRS ULTIMATE LIFE FORM!

It's weird, but I like this story. When I read, it's a little weird and crazy, but I like it somehow. This has to be the ONLY sex story I like.

Bruh. Bruuuuuh. You COPIED AngelCam7's fanfic "Crazy Fun with Mind Control." This isn't an original story; no, it's plagiarism.

You are a perverted dick.

I loved looking forward to the sequel. I just hope what has not abandoned the idea

Why did you rip off crazy fun with hypnosis at first I was like ok mabby its just a similar thing but SILVER CONTROLLING VIINES sorry but its like you copied and pasted this hole story and dont say it was your idea first because we both now that if silver where going to restrain someone he wholdn't use FUCKING VINES he whold use his powers

I normaly don't read "sexual stories" (Even if it's rated M or not), but if it's about mind control stuff or things like that, I'm game. But I can't wait for the sequel! Good job with this story!

eZflaffer

w-whens the next part? this is wicked good

sequel!

BULLSHIT

HA HA! Even if they break free of his mind control now, he has SOOOOOOO much black-mail it's not even funny! Well, yes it is, but that's not the point. The point is that now Meph can totally get Shadow just on the tail fetish alone! XD That's so cool

holy cow that was hot - sequel please! i wanna see them all hook up :)