Emily’s boggart should have been Malfoy proposing she would have been petrified and super annoyed. I still enjoyed it

Is it bad that i ship Draco changing then being with Emily?

wasn’t emily on the quidditch team second year? i seem to remember a bludger coming after her and harry? idk. maybe she wasn’t

personally, i’d love for her to be part of the triwizard tournament.

well, now they have the map!

i think my only concern is that emily seems to be a little too perfect. idk if that will change, but i’d like her to not be a mary sue for the entirety of this.

i know you're not really looking for direction at this point, but i think sirius should be their godfather. it doesn't make sense to split it up. and, i've read a couple of stories where the writer bent too much to the whims of a reader. if you feel it will be better, defo go with sirius!

Ok. I don't get it: she learns the Patronum Charm and then, when needed it, don't use it? little harry protagonism going, may I say. That out of the equation, nice chapter!

So Im binge reading your stories. Just found them and they are amazing! In my opinion regarding the Goblet the Fire even though it was already written, I honestly stuck between wanting Harry to only to compete or Harry and Emily competing. I just am curious how Emily would repeat to her brother being in the competition because of how close they are. However, I am also super curious how Snape would react to Emily being the competition. They are super close and I think Snape would go head over heels making sure she is staying safe throughout the competition and getting all the help she would need despite the rule teachers shouldn't help the contestants. Great stories and series! Back to binge reading!

It's not just this chapter it's the story so far. It's awesome. I love how you take the regular Harry Potter stories and just insert emily into this.

I love how you wrote this chapter it was really really awesome your language style even what happened and I reckon Emily should take in the triwizard tournament to make burger block

I know that you wrote this a long time ago but I was really wanting Snape to be Emily's godfather because it just seems right that a girl who looks like Lily would be. I'm glad that you made Snape like her though unlike how he seems to hate Harry even though he is protecting him. I have been a lot like Emily when I watch or read the movies or the books by seeing the good in Snape. I tend to be good at reading people anyways.

gonna be starting my deathly hallows fanfiction soon

Fab job even better than the last one xx

Another great chapter I like the interaction between Snape and Emily and am looking forward to see how the story plays out now she knows about Sirius

I just found your first hp story yesterday and am over the mood to find you have done the whole lot!I am hooked, your story is written really well and so far you have done a great job at slotting Emily into the story like she has always been there. Great job