I wish there was more to the story

I was worried knowing this was the last chapter. Were you going to kill Aislynn? Or have the vamps end her? I couldn't imagine.

Instead we have peace. Thank you for the imprint in the conclusion, for Jake's resolution and happiness and for a tremendous original character. I'm glad I found this story, even though it's several years since you wrote it and I doubt you are still involved. This was very good.

Edward helping Jacob? Wow! This is a special story for such a response and support to Jacob's pain. Though the aid came through Jasper from Aislynn as one empath to another.

Love the explanation of the soul circle, it's enchanting. I think Jacob is going to have a problem with Jasper and Alice visiting Aislynn. And there's jealous Bella too.

They are both concerned over imprinting. He wants to imprint for the security. He also wants to choose. She knows there is an imprint pending but she wants it let him choose. Yes, Bella was just a crush but the real purpose of Jacob in Bella's life was to save her life and give her a choice. She chose Edward. I love the theme of choice and free will.

Jacob is interesting. He is uncertain and nervous because he has been hurt by Bella. He fights destiny because he thinks that if he wasn't a monster he wouldn't have lost Bella. But he is a young man and he is attracted to A. Enjoying this, wish you were still writing so we could talk.

I like what Billy says to Jacob. He knew that Bella was not the one for him but he couldn't accept it. I like that he still has free will, that even though imprinting is a possibility it will include a choice. I like Emily as a painter. I am worried about Jasper and Alice. It was interesting that Bella is jealous, she doesn't want Jacob but she doesn't want anyone else to have him either. I think that's canon.

Update soon plz.

I apsolutly LOVED this fanfiction! :) you a very talented wrighter. When i first started reading it i was exstatic that she was diffrent and an empath! :) i cant wait to check out your other stories

Great Story...I have always wanted Jake to imprint on a woman not a baby. Thanks - Xanath

This was completely brilliant and is by far the best jake of story I've read yet! I love y

OMG! Such a good story! So well written! I love it!

the quotes at the beginning of each chapter were a nice touch and all very true. The story was well written and well thought out i really enjoyed reading it.

Awesome, awesome chapter darlin! Loved the sense of urgency that you brought into this section. I really truly hope that this isn't the end of it because I don't think I'm alone when I say that I would love to see more of this story. Even if this is the end of this tale I have to say I enjoyed the hell out of it! Hope to see more from you soon! Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Luna

Nicely done darlin! This chapter was just hot, Hot, HOT! Loved how the smut was balanced out with the emotional aspects of their coupling. Just like it usually is in real life. You have an amazing talent and I can't get enough of this story. Love it! Off to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work and keep writing!

Luna