Reviews for The Twelve Days of Christmas
A Reader chapter 4 . 6/30/2019
Got here some 8 years after posting but still leaving this review :)
Better late than never, eh?
So far, I love your portrayal of Tala's hate for Christmas. It resonates with my own a lot :) Also, I think I would pay in gold and diamonds for a picture of Bryan in that hat :D
ShilvaA chapter 12 . 5/26/2014
Really excellent story! :D a pleasure to read, thank you! X
CGRD chapter 12 . 8/17/2012
I finally got around to writing my review ….. Only delayed by 8 months …’ Sorry, sorry! Anyway! When I first read the summary, I was a little disappointed, because it made Kai sound like, well, a wimp. Fortunately I was positively surprised! Even though I prefer Bad/Dark Kai over Christmas loving Kai, I still enjoyed the story. I did however absolutely love bitchy, little anti-christmas Tala and sugarhigh Ray! You’ve got me fantasizing about Bryan and Ray, which btw is a seriously neglected pairing in my opinion! You should try writing a Bryan/Ray-fiction with lots of dark themes and smut! Or you could just continue with whatever you’re planning, either way you’ve got me hooked! Hopefully the next fiction will soon be up, pretty please :D
Hopefully my review is understandable, because English is my second language ;)
Sage Nightwing chapter 12 . 3/5/2012
Yes.

That was awesome.

No u haven't lost ur touch.

I can't wait for the next one.

~Riku~
littlelil1991 chapter 12 . 12/25/2011
I liked this chapter and tthe details and I really liked the end part where Tala says bah humbug. Anyways great story even tho I think there shud have been a part of Kai opening Tala's presentt for him since he thought Kai would love it so
howdoid3l3t3thisthing chapter 12 . 12/24/2011
mmmm smut. :D

lawl talas a scrooge.

great story :D i really liked it. and todays my birthday; great birthday present XD

-kookie
The Happy Shark chapter 12 . 12/24/2011
Straight into the good stuff I love it of course you've not lost your touch my sweetling hot as ever Kai is such a sexy beast haha! Happy Xmas my Jellyfish Queen xxx
littlelil1991 chapter 11 . 12/23/2011
Its funny that Tala kicked the radio since I probably would have done the same thing lol. Glad that its is almost time to see what Tala will do on the so hated holiday. Can't wait for the next update :)
howdoid3l3t3thisthing chapter 11 . 12/23/2011
ooooh boy. oh boy. oh boy. oh boy. i cant wait. :3
The Happy Shark chapter 11 . 12/23/2011
I thought the idea was to post it a day early as you probably won't get chance to do it on xmas day? Pornz early is good we like early presents
The Happy Shark chapter 10 . 12/23/2011
Versions of xmas carols that don't exsist? I wonder who that reminds me of that made me giggle out loud. Kai jealous would be smexy Kai.
littlelil1991 chapter 10 . 12/23/2011
Hey I just want to say I really like the story since im not much into christmas either and its even more funnier since its my birthday as well. However I really like the story and how its going. Can't wait to see what happens for Tala and Kai on christmas day :)
howdoid3l3t3thisthing chapter 10 . 12/22/2011
best. party. EVERRRRRR. lol
The Happy Shark chapter 9 . 12/22/2011
Dawwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet Kai's made of soft squishy really. A new Joe for Kai? Joe II Son of Joe he's back...he's pissed.
The Happy Shark chapter 8 . 12/22/2011
I almost feel bad for Bryan but not quite clearly Rei needs a sugar ban like some else I know.
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