Oh god a tsundere alduin.
*Laugh*

Great story make more chapters is all i can say

This is some good stuff. Please don't abandon it!

Dear Friend,
I am a old fan of your fanfic, this one specifically, and I was trying to get some corage to ask, are you going to continue this? The idea of Alduin being a woman is so great and kinda original, I'm a fan of it for some months but just now I had the corage to ask, I'm such a coward. Sorry for bothering you, I'm realy sorry if I did.

Please continue this! This is wildly entertaining! Great work!

Oh...THIS is gonna end well! :D Good luck convincing Esbern not to run Alduin through!

Update as soon as you can. Otherwise you get to say hello to my friends Fireball and Sword.

*waves sword around wildly in the air while charging a fireball*

Alright, all joking aside, please update this ASAP. This is quite a unique fanfic. Not only is it one of the only three fanfics that have Alduin listed as one of the characters, but it's also an interesting plot in it's own right.

I read fanfic. I like fanfic. I favorite fanfic.

Really some awesome story dude! Ilike the way you write, it all seems to flow. Cant wait to read more!

You're not off to a good start, mate.

It seems to me like the feyn do jun would put up more of a fight against the man who handed him his greatest defeat. How does the Dovahkiin drag Alduin half-way across Skyrim without a firefight of thu'ums happening?

Also, why the need to translate the Dragon's language in the same sentence each and every time?

In the future, you may wish to portray the God of Destruction a bit more plausibly and leave the translations in a section at the end of each chapter.

i can forsee many arugments from here, then intense dungeon diving episodes (if your dragonborn is a saractic person this would be a great idea for the theme "Once again diving into spider nests, dreagar filled crypts and the occasional falmer nest...whats not to love about being an adventurer?", or rather humorous person *all great people have quirks...and you can never not have a quirk that seperates you from the bunch!)

also im forseeing alduin not knowing what simple things humans do...such as needing the simple things in life and "her" new found sexuality...and all the benefits and curses that comes with it...with "her" cursing more then anything to go back to being a dragon of destruction...all the while trying to get back at the human that did this to "her"...im gonna have fun reading this!

(besides alduin is my personal favorite dragon...cool as hell and doesnt give a shit what happens to the world...entirely chaotic)