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twi nana chapter 14 . 7/9 a bit abrupt, but nicely done, loved it, thanks for sharing. |
Mari Wollsch chapter 14 . 5/24 super! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
Debbie Hicks chapter 14 . 2/22 15. Birtjh from Snakes Bella's pov gthgen Three cracks then the as all pof Alien bites then too late the storm was coming the the eight kidds you broke law what llw exp;osed tpo you and then AVenomwas As all then the tore cords with they then wit bitten best friends then sivckjest was so paler then then lost weight then was gaunt but weak in poor health vomitd blood a lot from my appendix Nothingness with aliens/Vulcans's bot gthen suddenly veno mwas from as all of snakes grrew far vedry too big gthen Execution ofd myself with child with thmy husband wit they slaughterd punishefd wiyt they then Murdered then the both then lost a lot deal of blood too much more blod was dying Alice help me save her ogh my god yiu perish for marrying her then Executed then sick blood again Alice had a visi n then the they are what Coming at warp speed thenn uked the myself died with child then nuked both then then suddenly Venom was punched then to my dying heart failing with them with child then they delivered my eight the first a boy bitten with Alien Venom hardest then a girl then boys and girls bitten with razor sharp teeth nuked with myself with they brought there she' s dead good you Irina/other s with three are put to sleep wit them bitten drained of blood then AATOMIZED By vaporizing then too late never had more kids good bot burnt away then More Volturi guards bonds broken and she has a painful history of it wit as all of bites shredded the skins good they nuked freely was bitten then the fire raged onwardly then too late faded got a lot more worse Alice tried save her/they keep her kids they are aging like Vulcan children then Woke up paler the machine suddenly flatlined had stopped breathing Alice they did to her/they her son is venomous saved her life punched venom his one myself never gasped or breathe again begcame beautiful but far more sexy thanks to the kids aged to be to look at in preteen stage grown up Alice who did to you my hand on ,my throat Oh god I Need to hunt animals survived the change then nuked wit they with the kids with both with witnesses reported we found out Isabella Marie Lahote is dead but turned successfully by her son is venomous with others shattered bring them a newborn died here with the kids are Teenagers are departed wit they survive the change sliced there with freaks then they are completely lost from here good brought there then too late relearning process was immortal by now Alice she is not human anymore wit they the kids are fully-grown in teenage bodies had mates gasp they heard rumors they know of your heirtage then too late nuked from here wit they sliced vanished from here good they broke rule of them dried out of blood ast replaced by animal blood see to it at once verdict to them brought there Death rid of them then too late Alice had a terrifying vision gasping Volturi all of them who of her blood supply then Snapped bot cords then kids had kids/they more Terminated brought there good guard they been executed with they are Destroyed that I Been looking for then too late More than Volturi guards good train them then us/they stopped aging from here Alice they been what turned you okmy now Yellow/black eyes so his they converted as a very strict Vegetarian but I Have a headache the focusing more Starfleet marine powerful but more Federation powerful gifted young lady you are a ,mostly more powerful but the strongest bself-defensive mental and physical shield too late never was human again then Sliced tore freely brought there good gifted wit they then burning freely then she's dead wit them with her great-grandchildren are talented but supernaturally planetary gifted rest killed her/they tore head officially cursed them with her/him blew up bring them good then too late ATOMIZED By vaporizing taken from us/they good more guards of the Volturi stolen from here bury them then too late never had children again the damages was real swore vengeance wanted justice Alice she is grieving of her infertlilty oh my god we can't be killed mess with my great-great-grandchildren this gun going to get it it reacted with my moods was really in fury myself wanted the Volturi terminated had been altered Alice she is very furious but sadden and angry in rage of the loss of her fertlity gasp was murdered with they nice 24th century clothes bangs and all we are going to fight them gasp then nuked freely then nulled freely bot vanished good they broke of them end them there then lost from here then terminated there then humans were in black for us/they Alice they did this to us/they then were in aboard above Earth then too late Warped from here was with each ten or more then then were with as all of it asleep into tubes nuked frozen as years went by then Vanished were as all of them good dead were as all of them destroy them as all of mostly took over Earth good they as all of them siblings on the planet Vulcan awaited them nuked five wit they as all of supernatural beings then too late 2020 came at long last nuked us/they stopped aging from here bodies vanished lost twelve pounds of it myself never aged again so they stopped dying and living Alice they done this act huh Mother! we can't have kids oh no Alice we had kids as all of them gasp you look young by cryostatis it really happened never was alive. |
MMTyler chapter 14 . 12/14/2019 I enjoyed your stories your storyline was shocking I don't know where you got your ideas but they were good. Although you say you won't practice equine secretly hoping do. |
MMTyler chapter 12 . 12/14/2019 You really had me worried with the last chapter I am so glad you showed up when he did. I need a nap here that he was finally able to work Bella even if it was public. |
MMTyler chapter 1 . 12/14/2019 You have made me so happy when you decided to continue the story. |
southernpur-rica chapter 14 . 12/8/2019 Damn I hate that this is the end. Wish there had been more |
southernpur-rica chapter 13 . 12/8/2019 Naw such cuties |
southernpur-rica chapter 12 . 12/8/2019 I wonder what f he’s gonna need to claim her as well now?... |
southernpur-rica chapter 11 . 12/7/2019 Oh shit he kissed her!? Eww |
southernpur-rica chapter 10 . 12/7/2019 We better get a rejection |
southernpur-rica chapter 9 . 12/7/2019 Maybe Jake isn’t all that bad |
southernpur-rica chapter 8 . 12/7/2019 Communication kiddos |
southernpur-rica chapter 7 . 12/7/2019 Bella made that really easy and pretty painless for Jake |
southernpur-rica chapter 6 . 12/7/2019 So she’ll be able to break the imprint so Jake can move on. |